You met my rage
with one of your own
dreadful and beautiful
like an addiction, loaded.
smouldering, burning blue
eyes that freeze me.
You met my rage
and Oh it was magnificent
Glorious, a trembling rage
That seized me.
Please tell me what you think
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Another stunner!
Short, compact but full of power! And Sexy!
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Cool!
Rage can be likened to a couple that gives love equally to each other. The repitition is an example of that. Otherwise the brevity of the poem makes it easy to read and understand. -
This was pretty good. The wording was excellent and the imagery was vivid. Although it was a bit short, I think that the length did not hinder your message. Enjoyable poem.
"You met my rage
and Oh it was magnificent
Glorious, a trembling rage
That seized me."
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