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In a Beautiful World

Never the love did I see,
As there be truth in sight,
More so than thrice I sought
Goddesses of both dark and light.

Kisses sweet in liberation
Enchantress of mind born chain
Strength together as the sword or pen
In hindsight more from pain.

Forbidden love, so noble a mistress
Devotions charge of mistrust
Does one mask cover another
Solemn goodbye's leave winters dust.

The chase, oh the wonders of the chase
Sweet beauty that still does capture my heart
Though scorned, burned, unrequited
Ventricles still refuse to part

Journey onward, seeking home
My love with all it's laugh's and cry's
For all so different, the light and dark
From first kisses to their last goodbyes

-invisible comfort

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  • Harlequin
    October 3, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Such a beautiful write, the flow of the words...
    the words are written so ...beautifully.
    Jeff


  • JoyfulWriter
    January 4, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Such a beautiful piece of amazing poetry here....so perfect in every way and I so much enjoyed the read....keep the ink flowing...smiles, Terry