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Trust me lately

"Trust me." he said...

Yeah trust, what is it?

I have had so many let downs in my life.

My dad left, my mom is sad, and I feel so lost.

Trust does me nothing, or so I thought, but he has mad me trust.

trust what?

Fear.......I trust my fears now.

And I trust him.

He doesn't have my whole heart....because I won't let it go.

But he has a hold and promised he won't let go.

But I trust more and more.

Because Bren showed me more.

...

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I still don't trust all the way but I'm getting better.

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  • Diatribes
    April 26, 2007
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    "...I trust my fears..", yeah they are quite reliable arent they.
    Always so honest and lucid.


  • doughjoe silver member
    January 18, 2007
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    Good

    Thanks for sharing this with me


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    January 5, 2007
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    good

    This is a good poem. You are a very good write. Emotions can be felt through out the piece. This poem expressed feelings many of us would not admit to feeling. But, brlieve me you all have them eveery now and then. You are a young write on the rise. Keep it up. JAD