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I Found the Way!!!

Verse 1
I used to be like you
tryin to be cool
but it never got me an-y-where
It was only just
Causing me des-pair

Chorus
I beg you to follow me
everything will be alright
I will help you get back (get)
back up into the light
I swear i'll help you (in)
anyway i can
But for me to do so
you'll have to be a man
You'll have to open up
open up to Him
O-ther-wise, sa-tan-will, tear-you-up
limb from limb

Verse 2
Why does it have to be this way?
No one really knows
I guess its just
the way He chose
whatever happens to you
All He wants you to do is this
Follow Him, let Him help (you)
Out of the abyss

Chorus
I beg you to follow me
everything will be alright
I will help you get back (get)
back up into the light
I swear i'll help you (in)
anyway i can
But for me to do so
you'll have to be a man
You'll have to open up
open up to Him
O-ther-wise, sa-tan-will, tear-you-up
limb from limb

Chorus (take it up a key)
I beg you to follow me
everything will be alright
I will help you get back (get)
back up into the light
I swear i'll help you (in)
anyway i can
But for me to do so
you'll have to be a man
You'll have to open up
open up to Him
O-ther-wise, sa-tan-will, tear-you-up
limb from limb

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  • theresmooreupnorth
    December 22, 2007
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    truely inspiring. nothing more to say since you left me speachless.


  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 24, 2007
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    Very powerful and full of Truth. I love it. Keep penning and writing for God. He is worthy of all our Praise. Keep the Faith. God bless you in all that you do my friend.

    In Christ Jesus,

    Tabitha


  • debilynn gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    very powerful lyrics. you did great son! i would love to hear this put to music. God bless you

  • goalsv
    January 31, 2007
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    Very nice lyrics, ther is a lot of truth in them this can be a vey good witnessing tool.

  • Tabitha-Robin
    January 18, 2007

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    Powerful

    This is a very powerful song. It is wonderful. thank you for sharing this one with me. I feel God's spirit in this one. God bless you.

    tabitha

  • Deatheaterwannab
    January 13, 2007

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    wow!

    very powerful and moving! i would like to see a couple of atheists read this and try to ignore Jesus. God Bless


  • Spiritual Nature
    January 12, 2007

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    Great song. So true. The only way is through our Lord, Christ and Satan will "tear you up..." Wish I could hear the music with the song, but Kevin is working on that.


  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    January 9, 2007

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    i saw your group message about this song and i decided to check it out i really like this and it makes mme think since i'm a non believer but yea i loved it and thanx for making me think about things
    love*
    MMS


  • Broken Machine
    January 9, 2007

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    Awesome song! I loved it! It was really great! But when you're talking about God, you need to capatilize the Him! But other than that great! Keep up the good work!!!


  • Wind Shadow
    January 9, 2007
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    Amazing

    I thought it was GREAT! Keep up the good work!


  • troyias
    January 9, 2007

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    wonderful

    Great job.  I could almost hear this as I read it.

    The only problem I saw wasn't in the way it was written.

    The Line:

    Follow him, and get yourself
    Out of the abyss

     

    Good thought but we can't get outselves out We have to reach for God He has to pull us out.

     

    Maybe:

     

    Follow Him, Let Him help

    you out of the abyss

     

     Just a thought.

     

    Otherwise Great Job.

     

    Go with God my friend

     

    Valerie



  • Extreme Simplicity
    January 4, 2007
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    This is wonderful! I love it! Just wonderful!
    ~K~


  • SenoraArcadio
    January 4, 2007

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    wow this is a very deep poem and ineteresting 2! God Bless you!! I hope to read more of your work!

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