River!
My waters reached you
and you love me cradling me like a mother,
your wide banks her hugging arms
whispering me a lullaby.
With our waters we are feeding birds
and rigid roots with life.
Our waves entwined with
light given to us from the sun,
we salute heavens, touching each other
while in the depths our love has its own kingdom.
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WOW, beautiful......What magic you write of. Love, Feelings, Longing. Great.
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Yes, this poem has a special feelings and meaning. You know how to read it within it's lines.
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there is a certain fairy like magic and atmosphere to this poem, the metaphors hinting yet allowing various interpretations, lately your work is richly shining, my friend
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Thanks Joe for your permanent support and deep review. That is what metaphors are used for.
~Sonja~
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Lovely
Hi Sonja. A beautiful write. Lovely personification. Excellent imagery, flow and tone. Deep expression of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Excellent word choice. Lovely simile. Nice alliteration. An outstanding piece. Well crafted and a most enjoyable read. Shelley
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Hi Shelley. How many adjectives I found here, lol. Thank you dear friend for such a nice comment.
~Sonja~
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Outstanding
I liked this a lot. A beautiful nature poem with a lyrical feel and exquisite imagery. I loved the last couple of lines and the whole concept of the two rivers entwining, how they bring life to the environment, the trees and the birds drinking from the water. A lovely poem to read with so much imagination.
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Thank you dear friend. Actualy this poem was previously written on my language and than translated. I was always inspired with nature and all magic and love what nature is offering to us. Many people unfortuantely can't see "under the surface".
~Sonja~
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Excellent!
OK Sonja, I want whatever you are taking Now I do think there is something going on, you are way to romantic these days. 
Whatever it is, keep it up! Great job!
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No, no Dawn, I have some special prescription and I will not share my private dose...lol Thanks for comment and applause. I will try to come with much more...
~Sonja~
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WONDERFUL!
As two souls join as one and share their hearts and their love it is indeed a very beautiful thing.
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Thank you Kevin for your wise conclussion. It's always nice to see people who are thinking about presented metaphors.
~Sonja~
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