Will this torture never end
The pain is hitting harder
I will never take him as a friend
Regardless of his ardor
What this horrid mask does hide
Throbs into my very soul
Causing me to be tongue tied
This pain will take its toll
Nothing I can see with these torn eyes
My own screams I can not bear
Wishing to express my cries
To painfully say a prayer
Hide me from this revolting scene
No need to see this sight
I’ll stand behind this screen
Where nothing is quite right
Pain and torture hand in hand
Disgusting is the thought
Causing atrocious demands
Leaving me distraught
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest #3 on.....ANYTHING by xox-lankan-xox.
450 points, ended January 8, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter Anything And Everything You want ! Win loads of points , HMs and much more !! (prewrites allowed )(a truthwriter's contest )( more than 326entries ) by sweethelper.
300 points, ended March 10, 2007, 140 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bury Me In Black #2 (dark poetry) by EvenStarsBreak--x.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderfully dark! Not at all what I am use to from you, but very well done. Stepped on the wild side one this one and made it work! Painful and so deeply stated.
Best to you always!
Great job...
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very well written.
"Nothing I can see with these torn eyes
My own screams I can not bear
Wishing to express my cries
To painfully say a prayer"
Was my favorite part... good job and thanks for entering my contest. -
awwwwwwwwwwww ! this is so good !! just awesome !! i loved it !! " ache of reality " , title iself was strikin and the write needless to say was just rockin !!
"Pain and torture hand in hand
Disgusting is the thought
Causing atrocious demands
Leaving me distraught" ( my fav lines )
thank you so much for this wonderful write and best wishes in the contest ,
your well wisher ,
-truthwriter-
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Wow this is a very well written poem, hope it's not personal. But wow, your a great poet, I can't even write poems as good as yours even if I was given a year! Thanks so much for entering my contest and good luck! My favorite lines were
"Nothing I can see with these torn eyes
My own screams I can not bear
Wishing to express my cries" Thanks again and take care
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I deal have delt with migraines since I was 6. So in a way this is my own personal demon. But with God at my side I do Pretty Good.
Thank your for your kind words and encouragment.
*Go with God*
Valerie
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You will know when to open the window...
Darling
I have been there
wanting to dare but
unhappy without any air
my fears, then, interrupt.
Scared of being myself
my mirror darkly responds
you're losing your wealth
as my comprehension absconds.
Smoosh
Janet
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