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net romance

He met her on a networking site,
liked her profile,
and added her up
they started exchanging scraps
and became the best of net buddies
it only took him two scrap-sessions
to ask her
for her yahoo id

Now they were closer,
they chatted ceaselessly,
it felt as if they knew each other
since early childhood.
With a simple 'wassup',
their chatting-session would begin
they would discuss the weather,
discuss their lives,
share opinions,
and pass naughty snides

Just a few months later,
they started talking on phone,
and quite soon,
frequently were they dating.
But this seemed  boring...
there were no audibles,no smileys,
and a birthday wish couldnt match the ingenuity
of a catchy e-card!

So they decided to shift back
from dates to phonecalls,
from phone to messenger,
and messenger to networking site.
but they still have a place for each other
deep down in their hearts....
they havent stopped exchanging
flirty scraps yet!

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 29, 2007
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    lol this is a cool poem, thanks for entering it in my contest! good luck


  • I-Am-Custard
    March 31, 2007
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    This is sweet, but doesn't really read like a poem, more like a story with line breaks added. It left me a little cold if I'm honest, I wasn't given any reason in the poem to give a damn about those two people, they were strangers, no emotions.
    Thankyou for entering, but to be honest this could do with some work.


  • u took my user name
    January 6, 2007

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    haha. lol. sorry. the way you started this made me laugh. i see love at first sight. lol
    i don't know if this is personal... but...
    i mean... id on't know. lol