This is not some fucking game.
You screwed up, now take some blame.
Some things can never be the same.
You piece of shit, you've sunk so low.
The lies you told they will never know.
Now I can't watch my children grow.
What the hell did you do that for?
You stupid god damn whore.
Did you even the score?
You left their hearts on the floor.
Left them begging for more.
This time I can't make things right.
Someone's gone and snuffed out the light.
Impaired my vision and stolen my sight.
Look around..What did you expect to see?
None of these heartaches came for free.
I doubt if we'll ever be able to agree..
I know who you did that for.
You nasty two cent whore.
It's my turn to even the score.
Stomp your heart til it beats no more.
Then I'LL walk out that fucking door.
Leave you there on the dirty floor.
-Billy the Kid-
Author notes
This is about sad events that took place a few years ago, there was a nasty breakup and the only reason we lasted so long was because of our children, whom she does not have in her care!?!? A lot of lies were spread and nearly caused me to have a breakdown. It's really quite complicated.
My AP name is Billy the kid. I hope this helps a little
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So much anger I read..but I understand it....It's a hard thing when there are kids, little ones that don't even understand the whole situation...
But being honnest with eachother is good, but when you are getting into a nasty breakup and the children are being lied to too it is getting more and more sad...
I do hope you two could work things out for the kids...and I do hope you found love again...
good luck in my contest
and thnxs for following those rules
XXJeannette
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I must have missed this earlier...I miss the little explenation and your AP name ( or is it billy the kid?)in the authornotes, two of my only three rules..before I can judge and comment this could you edit that for me????
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not everyone that cheats, is considered a whore. I cheated and I'm not a whore.........but then again, I didn't sleep with the guy or anything. I have come to learn that even a kiss simplifies cheating. I can see that you are or were hurt by someone that has cheated on you.
when you say:
This is not some fucking game.
You screwed up, now take some blame.
Some things can never be the same.
you are right. some things can never be the same after someone cheats but you can only try to leave what happened in the past and forgive. it may be hard because not everything will be the same.......ever but most things can go back to how they were eventually.
and it is true.......to take some blame. when someone cheats, it is both parties fault.......not just one or the other.
at least you told the truth of how you feel or felt at the time.......it's best to show your feelings instead of leaving them all inside. good write. I hope things work out for the best. thank you for entering and good luck.
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This is wonderful. I remember being so angry that all I could say was profanity. I called him and his new girl nasty names because that was all I could think of them by. the line "You piece of shit, you've sunk so low.
The lies you told they will never know." Speaks to me in ways that are hard to describe. Thanks for entering. Good luck. -
Anger is familiar when you've been hurt. I once wrote something like this. My heart and mind were exploding with rage over being wronged. I love the line "You piece of shit, you've sunk so low.
The lies you told they will never know." seeing piece of shit in here just made me smile, even with the seriousness of the poem. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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That hit me good. Inspired or true. It's allways good to vent via poetry.
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Anger, resentment, and revenge. Fueled by pain. I wonder is this a piece of you or inspired? Lol... do not answer that simply a redundent musing. It is wwell written and well expressed regardless of which it may be. And even if it were merely an inspired write, the reality of the emotions still throbs within the words like an undying heartbeat. Great job I wish you well in this contest and thanks so much for entering.
~Ocean
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