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My Time Has Come.

Sadness lingers
in my heart
I feel as though
I'm being torn apart.

Losing friends
I've met online
and my friends
I've known for some time.

I think it's time
to leave the net
to much pain involved.

I'll stick with posting
my stories and poetry
but making new friends
it will never be.

I'll stay here
in my little world
where I belong
and wish everyone
long life and happiness.



No one has read the comment I made so I will put it here.  I am not leaving AP just not doing the net thingy anymore.  I love it here would not leave.

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Sorry it is a sad poem.  And the end of my time online.  I will still post here but think I have had enough of all the rest.
Written May 29th, 2003

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  • rgrpaperboy
    June 7, 2003
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    This poem is sad also but do you what leave and just post poems?
    People need people to hopefully fill a lonely feeling. Thank you for your comments on my poem, LIVING ALONE. Yes, I know you can be with people and still feel lonely. I get lonely both ways. Living alone I can't stand coming home to four walls and no one to talk, hold, hug, etc. There have been many days where I've cried because I just can't figure out why? Please, stay in touch on this site. I'm sure there are a lot people on this sit that can be talked to.
    Take care and Thank you, Rick

  • Asterick
    June 3, 2003
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    omg omg omFg! Well my dear, that is fine with me... Ad long as you keep reporting that youve posted more... We didnt talk much *tear* but I still feel pretty close to you... Ill miss you! Just make sure to read some of my work too muwahaha!
    Ah hem, anyways...I liked it... The work I mean. And I know what you mean about the sadness of online... *wont explain now*
    Well, I guess this is until later from me to you babe!

    ~Sarah


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    May 30, 2003
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    This is a good but really sad write.
    That really sucks that you feel that
    way...but hey...things change, and stuff
    happens. It's funny how that works.
    I'll miss your helpful tips and kind
    words.

    twizted bizkit


  • NeptunesMight
    May 29, 2003
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    im sry you feel that way but remember to send messages through yahoo (even if im onlione ill get them when i get on) or my email ...hope you feel better soon **feels sick too** ..jack..