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Lexie

Missing image
Lust of a kind
Echoes my mind
Xanadoo of poetry
Invades my identity
Erotic poetress Lexie

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For a new friend.

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  • ellipsist
    August 11, 2007
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    beautifully done!

    loe the way you rhyme the end lines in your acrostics!


  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 11, 2007

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    Very elegant in words and display.
    I was very excited to see Xanadu here...
    that's my X theme for my alpha series!
    Shhhh, don't tell anyone! Blue


  • Trixie08
    April 27, 2007

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    This is really nice I loved the acrostic style writing. I think that Leixe was happy to have had a poem inspired by her and it's just a deeply erotic message behind the words.


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 23, 2007

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    i wonder what Xanadoo means
    it must have been hard to make an X
    I like your writes
    so short and sweet
    and always with some form attached to it
    atleast the ones I've read so far


  • Starrchild777 gold member
    January 11, 2007

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    It feels like you desire to immerse yourself in this persons presence and worship their personna..Simple & yet elegant...


  • Jarrod silver member
    January 5, 2007

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    acrostic with an "x" always is a tough challenge, but you did it well!!! Great job!! I have an acrostic called "More than..." if you ever want to, take a look!!

    Once again awesome job!


  • Fire N Ice
    January 4, 2007

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    WOW!

    What can i say LOL...
    im speachless, thankyou so much. This is an honour.

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