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Red Roses

Repose and rest awhile
Each poem makes you smile
Dreams that never end
Recent on line friend
Opens the door of my mind
Special poems are hard to find
Each poem a creation
She spurs my imagination

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For a new friend. Thank you for your poems.

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  • mitchybaby
    September 8

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    You are absolutely brilliant! I am so impressed and compelled by your writing. Not a flaw to be found, This piece is so much fun and so cute. Hats off to you


  • sue2
    August 2, 2007
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    Very nice


  • Katyv
    July 26, 2007
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    I like this acrostic poem. It is different and creative. I love roses! Roses are so beautiful.


  • holly9
    July 23, 2007
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    A great acrostic.


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 23, 2007

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    acrostic again
    more like how i would do it
    since i prefer rhyme over free styling
    but then that's just my opinion
    there are lots of free verse poems out there
    that really sound good
    and are powerful none the less
    but i like the challenge in rhyme
    once again
    a wonderful acrostic
    that friend must be lucky


  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007

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    I loved this poem very much

    L ovely with every word
    O nly you can do it this well
    V ery unique...i can tell!!!
    E xciting acrostic is what i say
    D isguised as a poem...but under...a dream

    I t was just amazing...i don't know what else to say
    T ata...i must be going now...GOODBYE!!!!1


  • Jarrod silver member
    January 5, 2007

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    another acrostic, you seem to like writing them. You do write them well so it works!!! nice little poem and great background!


  • PrettyLilBullet
    January 4, 2007
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    That's So Nice

    ^_^ It's awesome to write a poem about a friend. And you took her name and made the poem with it. I could never do that. I applaud your talent!


  • Aeonna
    January 4, 2007
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    WOW

    Thank you. this a wonderful poem... i love all of it...

    red roses

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