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Sweet Weakness

I am drawn to this weakness,
The sweetness of it,
That I do not want to move
For fear that it may leave me
And I would be seeking it,
Seeking you.

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  • WilliamLaughing
    October 24, 2008
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    And i'm off seeking it. thank you.


  • Anthony-
    January 6, 2007
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    Still Good

    Again, I love your simplicity and the way in which it really does bring out so much more than perhaps a hidden piece would. Your writing really is reflective of your thoughts and mediations. Thank you for your presence. I hope that you are well and that we talk soon. Anthony.


  • Mountain of Light
    January 5, 2007
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    I completely understand/relate to the thought which is being expressed...very beautifully done!


  • Vagabond Samurai
    January 4, 2007

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    Strnagely, your work could relate to a person, or to your own ability of writing. I think this went over well with me, especially if you haven't wrtten in an extended period of time~


  • Marissa Ann Scott
    January 4, 2007
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    Good

    Hi chica, I definately know this feeling. Believe it or not. Very lovely write.

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