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Abuse You Cos I Can't Be Loved

You know I love you baby sis,

your my little sister right?

Come here now give me a kiss,

I'll hold you nice and tight.


I know that you want to know,

how grown ups show their love.

Come here I'll gladly show,

and bring myself bliss from above.

Grown ups kiss each other too,

when they love someone so much.

Come here baby let me show you,

how you can do this such.

This involves the tongue young one,

our tongues do dance and sing.

For it is like the birds have sung,

baby you wont feel a thing.

Now you remove your negletee,

this is to show me you care.

This shows that you trust me,

and will show me all you, bare.

Now I have removed my own,

dear sister sit on my lap now.

Baby girl your not on your own,

and show me you will allow.

My fingers will just touch your breasts,

though you've only just turned eleven.

I'm putting your love for me to the test,

while I am sent up to heaven.

Now I have a present for you baby,

for showing how much you care.

Come now girl, ontop of me,

upon my chest all left bare.


See that thing between my legs,

yes that bit that sticks out so much.

What you have to do next,

is give it just a little touch.

You are crying now baby stop it,

I don't want to hurt you now hush.

I think tonight I've had my fit,

yes for now I have had enough.

Tomorrow I will be back for more,

and will until you tell on me.

This will take long to deem to occur,

as I told you if you told you'd never see me.

So you don't know for 3 years now,

you will have to go through much more.

I do everything to you I can possibly allow,

and make you my own foolish whore.

You don't deserve it not at all,

but I have my own life troubles.

I never meant to make you fall,

I'd just never been good at cuddles.

So if you are out there now,

some abusers are just like me.

They do it because they are allowed,

and reckon they will be set free.

Sometimes they have difficulties,

and therefore need help by society.

I believe if we help both parties sincerely,

we can at least make the stakes go down gradually. 

Author notes

OK this is in the persona of an abusive older brother. It was inspired by an old friend I used to have in Primary school whom was going through this at aged 9/10. Her brother needed help but people just thought he was an agressive person, never asking him of his problems, even when he was young. Sometimes these people just DON'T see what they are doing as wrong as nobody tends to be there for them. This isn't in all cases, just some. So this is in the persona of one of those that just seeks love however they can get it, no matter if it damages another or is wrong in the laws of society. Some paedophiles and child abusers don't actually do this to children to hurt them, but to get attention or love from any source and something messes with their head, not giving them boundaries.

There is also the paedophile / child abuser that knows it is wrong, but it's all for the power rush. You think about it... We aren't born like that. What made him/her have such a sick mind? What can we do to prevent these people going near our children / siblings / cousins etc? Just think about that.

Just to let you know this poem isn't promoting violence to children... I AM TOTALLY AND UTTERLY AGAINST IT. I know a lot of people who have gone through it so I use that information and the empathic way I am to put myself into the abusers point of view but not as agressive but as confused, lonely and ... Eccentric, in a way. Thanks for reading and any comments are very much appreciated! x



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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 11, 2008

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    I feel like crying after reading that. this is one of those poems that grips you at your heart strings and sticks with you. A very remarkable write.


  • Forgot2Breathe
    October 6, 2007
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    this is so sad and wow i was in tears. this was beautiful, and i'm sorry for your friend.


  • Forgot2Breathe
    October 6, 2007
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    this is so sad and wow i was in tears. this was beautiful, and i'm sorry for your friend.


  • Simple-Fairytale
    July 17, 2007

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    Wow...this poem just blows my mind. It is really great in how you were able to show both points of view. Although it is sick, I couldn't stop reading. Every line made me keep going. Great job.

    -Dark Vixen-


  • BarbedWireButterfly
    July 17, 2007
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    this poem really meant a lot to me. it really makes you see both sides of the story and the different ways they experience it. i would have given you something to win but you have already won a gold and bronze and it's entered in 4 contests. sorry. thank you for your entry


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    June 22, 2007

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    Truly great write...full of emotion...and such a sad truth that there are people like this out there. Thanks for your write and entry into my contest.

    ~Raymond~


  • DancingRed
    May 15, 2007

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    Well rhymed and well described, but I must say that the feeling and message within your words far exceeds the technical side of poetry.

    Thank you for daring to write such a powerful & poignant piece.

    DancingRed.


  • Dark Whispers
    May 13, 2007

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    I have never been more disgusted and sad from reading a poem, and it horrible because these things happen to children all over the world and no one seems to care enough to stop it. thanks for entering


  • January 26, 2007

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    wow. disgust and sorrow at the same time. i feel for him, but for what he did, wow is all i can say. kudos to you my friend for writing such a truthful poem from his eyes.


  • Bdsm
    January 5, 2007
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    powerful. haunting.


  • countrychick06
    January 3, 2007

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    Wow

    Wow I am speachless...this is a great poem...there is so much emotion..i wish i knew what to say..Its amazing...wonderful job....good luck in the contest..
    take care
    countrychick06


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 3, 2007

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    damn, i wish i could think of something to say here but my mind is at a lose, you did a great job on this and i know that if everyone could read this it will help some ppl, keep it flowing

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