i've searched every way except going for you,
telling u how i feel like i was supposed to.
You look at me and my heart melts to gold,
can't stand these feelings, if love was poker i fold.
But know i will wait here just for you,
to hold in my arms like i wanted to.
can't beat that look when i look in your eyes,
just know your my rach can i be your guy.
just let me know when your ready for me,
and i'll come running and then you'll see.
the feelings i've built up and kept deep inside,
you must try to see and i'll try not to hide.
LOVE YOU RACH
A contest entry
- Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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very lovely. I like this one a lot. You are obviously so sincere w/your words. Great job thnks for entering and good luck.
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lovely
love u too xx
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words from the heart
This is so beutiful and quite sincere, the style is simple and straight foward showing that you have nothing to hide.it has the ability to pull on ones heart strings, hope she liked it.
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