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Wavy lines

I'm sketching wavy lines because i'm lost,
gettting from A to B is complicated because you have to learn a language first,
I know I lied I said I didn't want your help,
but i'm tripping over where i've been.

I tried learning to count,
but i get stuck on 15,
getting here is isn't enough
and you get too fimilar with the unknown.

my line is smudged
and i'm tripping over what i've known,
and you weren't there a second ago,
and i wasn't here a year ago,

but i promise you i'll never leave...

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  • Kelsey-Jo silver member
    July 18, 2007
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    Wow... I love this. Not even sure what to say. You're brilliant, my friend. Brilliant.

    Kelsey-Jo