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Pray

hands
distich
intertwine
fingers lacing
pious

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Can anyone find the double meaning of the second line?

Comments: Lanturne style is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

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  • jo-el
    August 23, 2007

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    nice. i would have never really looked for a double meaning. infact i had to consult a dictionary for that word. which i was glad to do as education has never harmed me. the simplicity i like as well as the hidden depth. nice


  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007

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    what do you mean double- meaning??? whatever...it has nothing to do with why i am here... i am going to go right now...sit down onto my bed...and write somehting lyk this...if i lyk it...im going to post it and say that i was inspired by you...GREAT JOB...and oh....haha..i can see the lantern...haha...


    • Amera gold member
      January 24, 2007
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      lol, the secret... the word distich means two together it also means two sylables and it is in the second line. Here's another secret, most of my poems have a hidden secret. Most people dont find it and I never tell.


  • Im3
    January 3, 2007

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    I want to learn more about this style, but i have no way to find out what the double-meaning is of the second line.