I did fall in love with her body and how it interacted with mine...we came to a point where we couldn’t take our eyes out of each other...and we'd wait for any opportunity to be alone...sometimes we didn’t even have sex...we just tasted each others for hours...it was weird and intense and the more you wait the more it builds up inside of you...
And the outcome becomes greater...
sensuality...when your senses seem to sail on a smooth sea...when oil and honey mix in perfect harmony and everything you feel is just an undiscovered part of heaven...
Sensuality ,when you think you're going to blow up but you keep going till you die of pleasure...
when every single cell of your body aches and moans and gives you this intense feeling that's mixed between lust and beauty...
And suddenly the sea isn’t that smooth and you hit big waves that crash inside your mind
And your body burns up and takes every drop of passion in
Pure lust...
when nothing exists outside two bodies...and the fire within just grows to a point where nothing else really matters...and it just burns everything and you start living only for the sake of touching and tasting and kissing and licking and reading the curves with moist hands..
pure body work...when you're turned on to the point of no return...when you don’t think...you just act...and just work towards consuming the flesh in violent thrusts that feel so good...
when all you can see is wrapped up in the smell of a moist lingering body...
Hips that seem cut out from perfection...soft skin. Pulpous lips...big round butt...high perky breasts...
How can you explain and limit with words something you feel with everything you have? Memories residing in my mind…carved in my flesh…images of her nudity that I know by heart…the flames, the fury, the delicious bruises…
The turning away…
I did fall in love with her body and how it interacted with mine...we came to a point where we couldn’t take our eyes out of each other...and we'd wait for any opportunity to be alone...sometimes we didn’t even have sex...we just tasted each others for hours...it was weird and intense and the more you wait the more it builds up inside of you...
And the outcome becomes greater...
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Strong and powerful, an amazing write. I'm worried about /charnel/ with the connotation of dead flesh, as opposed to /carnal/ as in delights of the body, but I know this must have been deliberate, and will have to think more about that. The spark flies, the bodies flare and flash - and there is nothing that can be done, except to enjoy, because this will not last.
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hello!
you're totally right about the title being deliberate as you're totally right about the meaning but what i aimed for was the "carnal" meaning i just wrote it in french
thanks a lot for your comment my friend
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it's like passion painted with vivid colors, and perfect scenes are created, like a poet taking a blind man by the hand and leading him through a powerful ecstatic ride.. and I am the blind, enjoying every damn word!
beautiful
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"Sensuality ,when you think you're going to blow up but you keep going till you die of pleasure..."
Amazing...
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excellent
well i never in my life experience such passion and even if i did i dont think i can ever describe it the way you did your a great writer you have a hell of a way with words ggrrhhhhhhhh such intensity such passion and as the girls said the ending being like d intro is just amazing ok am babbling now but it is 3:30 am so
sorry
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as i said before... uu have shown a real passionate maturity in these lines,
you felt the depth of sensuality . the skin, the touch ... le desire charnel
love it.
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havin the same intro as the conclusion is really gr8 and very clever really!! i think it gave the whole intense thing to the piece
the way u picked ur words is just perfect .. this whole piece is ALMOST perfect
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no seriously now.. wut can i say "How can you explain and limit with words something you feel with everything you have? " and each time u read this piece ..
amazin sweety ..
me..
xxx
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serge.. it gets greater and greater everytime u put ur thoughts and ur feelings into words...
and it makes it even more intense the way you repeated the first lines in the end... somehow reminded me of "secret window" (the movie) dst really have anything in common with wut u wrote but it had the same impact and effect on me, if this is makin any sense lol..
u take me "there" ...
~rana~
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This is amazing..
You are amazing..
Seriously.. the way you describe lust.. just outstanding..
There's nothing much to be said apart from the fact that this is a great piece and you are a great writer..
Take care
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thank you
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