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Depression

sometimes
i find myself in a corner
shivering, shakeing
holding myself
tight
so i dont slip away
ever again

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  • sherry-lee
    June 12, 2007

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    yes. searching for an anchor. desperate for the tangible. to support us. to remind us that we're still here.
    i think of a water color when i read this, the paint pale and fading..
    nicely written ~


  • cut.throat.lover
    January 9, 2007
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    me too...


  • zochit2me gold member
    January 6, 2007

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    Powerful

    I often feel this way. Very powerful write here with descriptive imagery to match it's power. You have a good write here, I like it. Good luck in this contest.
    ~Becky

    • heartsnbows
      January 6, 2007
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      thank you becky

      well i hope you dont feel this way too offten, take care. big hug.


  • spot the pink
    January 5, 2007

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    this is poignant, i think a lot of people will be able to relate to it. the simplicity is effective, i think sometimes its the best way to get across complexity.
    thanks for entering, good luck x


  • pattyann4500
    January 4, 2007
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    So few word tell so much. Depression is something that I've dealt with since I was very young, and I know how horrible it can be. It can also ve frightening. You have summed it up in twenty words! Great job. Hugs, Patricia

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