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Gone

I never could say I loved you too much,
nor can I live without your subtle touch.
The way your kisses they always conved,
I knew you would never betray.

I want so bad to feel your breath upon my skin,
to become "one", once again.
To feel your soft lips caress my skin.
You'd start at my neck,
then you'd move down my body.
Oh how I miss the touches on my chest.

To feel your fingers,
entangled in mine,
I found they fit perfectly.
They fit as if they were made for each other.
I miss the feel of your skin against mine,
your body warmth,
tenderness intwined.

The way you would whisper my name,
so sweet.
The way we over came everything with such great defeat.
Not a day goes by,
that you don't come to my mind.
I always find thoughts of you, running through and through.

I wake up, in the middle of the night,
on the nights I can finally sleep,
I swear I can feel you,
I swear I can hear you,
but as turn to kiss your lips,
I find you're never there.

I find your never anywhere near.
So far away anymore,
how I give my life, my world,
just to hear you say
I love you,
just once more.

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  • dream5111
    January 5, 2007
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    I like this poem alot it has so much emotion behind it


  • the fire angel
    January 3, 2007
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    very sweet

    your words are meaningful and passionate. Even though it went from a thought fromn your mind, through your body, to your hand, to pen and paper, all that matters is it came from your heart. And that, is the most important...

    sincerly,
    brandon


  • wings of an angel
    January 3, 2007
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    This is a lovely poem that you have penned here good luck in my contest