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Precious

unimaginable,
unexplainable,
so very little hands,
reaching up to me,
so cute toothless grin,
the tiny body,
and the baby soft skin,
on fragile organs,
laying so very still,
she grows more tired,
her arms laying down now,
she is so tiny,
her little eyes closing,
her breathing even,
she's such a miracle,
and she's my whole life,
she's the light in my day,
my angel at night,
she's my precious baby.

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  • imperfectperfection
    January 4, 2007

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    So Cute

    Contratulation on the angel baby..it's a very sweet innocent tone of your poem that speaks so beautiful words for your angel. It's a very beautiful writing. Indeed precious baby is the best Angel.


  • green mother rose
    January 3, 2007
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    sooooo sweet

    Very good right...
    I love it.. blessed be
    Green mother rose

  • Blankness666
    January 3, 2007
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    awwwww that was really awesome! It reminds me of myself except I don't know if i'm having a girl or a boy. Although i'm young it excites me and I'm anxious to find out. Your poem made my day a little brighter.!!! Great Write!!!