Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The Dancer

The dancer is like an ocean
she moves and sways
watch her move
Isn't she lovely?

She captures us
even the walls are watching
she moves to the music
like a flower in the wind

There she goes
are you watching (?)
she turns like a ballerina in a jewelry box
the music stops
the dancer is still

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Angel With No Halo
    June 5, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I like this one alot. I tend to like free verse poems a bit more than rhyme. You have done this well also. It is not as easy as it seems to write a good flowing free verse poem. I hope you got an A+ on this.. It was really good.

    ~Krys~