when you took this away from her
she nearly died
from all the tears she cried
you called after her
when she turned around
as she walked on that holy ground
she hugged her friend before she left
on the brink of death
Please tell me what you think
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i am brilliant i know thank you thank you ill be here all week
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I love them sis, you are brilliant! [smile]
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I love it! Good job, and please keep it up!
You're really good at this form.
~.~Yvonne~.~
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I can only hope I am lucky enough to be around friends when I die....
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I have something like this in my poems lol I love them, they are a bunch of good little thoughts and emotions, great job and keep penning!!!
Emily
Gma
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