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Declaration of Independence


I stand here, tall

My mind’s made up

My tears too precious

To waste on you

My patience is gone

Just like you, absent

No more mind games

Now I’m free

I realized I need no man

To make me feel beautiful

Special, sexy, woman

Now on my own

I’ll make mistakes

And stand up alone

Just me, myself and I

I’m finally

Woman enough

To walk away

No regrets

Smile on my face

I stand here,

Tall, brave,

Independent

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I'm working on it ! see this new year things will change !!

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  • Midori-Ayana
    December 4, 2008

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    Oh, heck yeah!!!
    Be brave, girl!
    So many women out there need this kind of empowerment. They are too attatched to a piece of crap... without realizing they are better off by themselves...
    I'm glad you took that step away.

  • Agape Justin
    April 26, 2007

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    hey, long time huh! how are you doing. I see your still around writing wonderful pieces. just passing again thought I should say hi. only remember you don't need someone to make you feel your worth, you are already unique, the only you in this whole world and nobody is like you. take care and write ...

    Aj


  • Lady in Love
    January 4, 2007
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    Nice poem standing up for independence. Men, sometimes you need them other times not. How true that old saying is you can't live with them or without them...lol. This poem is a nice dedication that at least we learn from them and don't always need them to go on.


  • forty-one
    January 3, 2007

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    Applause!

    Love it! Love the positive message of independence you're sending out. Tears too precious... woman enough to walk away... no regrets, brave, independent. Yes, that's a message many young ladies need to hear. I'm proud of you for finding the strength to move on. You are bound to succeed, all you have to do is want to.

    Prince


    • GirlNextDoor
      January 5, 2007
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      Thanks a lot !! We need to stand up tall, strong even if it hurts too much ! If not then why live if not to fight it out !! Thanx for your comment!!

      Lots og hugs & kisses Kass


    • GirlNextDoor
      January 5, 2007
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      Thanks a lot sweetie !! New Year New Life !! And more now cuz my birthday is coming up so i gotta have a clean start! No more sadness allowed!!
      Besos y Abrazos Kass

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