Me he says
He wants me
When I know all he wants is my body
Long smooth butta brown legs
Flat stomach with something fat in the back
That us black girls are proud of
Chest perky and full
I am that phenomenal woman they call black thought
“Yes phenomenal woman “
“That‘s me”
Beautiful lips and silky skin
So soft to the touch
My tongue makes his everything stand up
I dunno I just have that skill
Wishes that he could hold me caress me
Make me say that five letter words
As he slams into me
Daddy ha
I have him hooked to me
He’s my addict
I’m his crack
And he knows that only black thought has it like that
I mean who has skill like me
That sends chills up and down your spine without touching you
Not one time
You love me you hate me
but i am still your obession
I have you but you can’t have me
If I was a gold digging tramp I would have all your money
But I have my own
And I get cake
Just like everyday was my birthday
And I so glad in knowing that I got you feinin
I am that phenomenal woman they call black thought
“Yes phenomenal woman”
“That’s me”
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks for the write, but I SPECIFICALLY asked for a poem that uses a form, and this does not. I unfortunately have to disqualify. Good luck in your future endeavors.
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That is why I love you.
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Go Head
"Just like everyday was my birthday"
Like that like...but yo the whole poem is just right to the point wit so many PHENOMENAL metaphors
Go head sis....your time is coming!!!!!!!!! and here!!!!!!!
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THIS IZ HOTTZ!!!
Yo I give you yo props phenomenal, I feel every word of this. It seems like you already kno me. This ya AP sis
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Phenomenal
wow wow wow!"That sends chills up and down your spine without touching you
Not one time"
that line was certainly true!
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nice job with writing this. not too fluffy with cliche. i enjoyed the flow of it. good read. keep writing.
blu -
This is a great poem, with so many aspects to it, I've read through it a few times now, everytime finding someting delicious I missed before.... wonderful piece
Karen -
Much props on loving yourself and expressing that in words. You are strong and proud a good combination. Keep pennin.
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very well written
You sound like the proverbial woman scorned.
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Ohhhhh I feel the power in this!
Its hot hot hot... I need to believe in me like this.. Go miss thang..
lOl
Green Mother Rose
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Nice
A phenomenal poem by a phenomenal woman =]
Nice job.
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Black Thought
I would like the add a line to your poem that
Even Your Shit is Phenomenal.
Crazy Hot - Lady you have skillz very poetically well endowed
Exceptional flow, excellent versing , Blazin' Message
Straight raw up in your face And WHAT style!
Lady Please keep doing your thing
You definitely Got it Raw, Uncut and 100% Pure
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this poem is kick ass
hey,
this poem is kick ass... -
ummmmmm...wow
wat the fuckkk........ure crazzzy....... -
I Love This
the way you discribe your self in this poem you sound very sexy
It's a ood thing that you hold your self in great high esteem... Don't let a guy treat you nothing higher than a queen.
1 luv
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