If I were to fall,
Would you help me back up?
If everything went wrong,
Would you give me your luck?
If my life fell apart,
Would you put it all back?
If I got myself lost,
Would you put me on track?
If I went crazy,
Would you make me sane again?
If I felt lonely,
Would you stand by me as a friend?
If I were to bleed,
Would you be there to stop the blood?
If I were to cry,
Would you help me stop the flood?
If I were to stop breathing,
Would you give me life again?
If I were to give up,
Would you never let me end?
If everyone stopped caring,
Would you still be the only one?
If my world just stopped shining,
Would you bring me back the sun?
A contest entry
- Rhyme Time by Kevan.
390 points, ended March 3, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Great entry, really good rhymes
Quite a great entry at this time.
Real emotion you showed as you let it flow out.
I really like what it's all about!
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YES YES YES YES YES YES YES I WOULD!!!!!!!!
YEAAAAA!!!!I WOULD!!!!!!!!!!
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YES i will be here
hey i would be there to help you anytime. this is a great poem i really like it it really makes you wonder about the people you know and if they really have your back if something went wrong and if they would be there to help you get your life on track. i really like this. Good Job.
RayOreo
Your Guardian Angel
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WOW
Nice Job! Well written, flowing was smooth. This poem keeps asking how loyal one would be, but I think it actualy defines what a true friend would be, they would do all of these things.
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