If My Tears Could Talk They'd Tell You...
She's got a sensitive soul.
She just wants to be loved for who she is.
She needs someone to love.
She has a huge heart.
She doesn't know where to begin.
She loves the little things in life.
She adores being a mother.
She's harder on herself than anyone else.
She's a giver, not a taker.
She likes to be treated well.
You are always on her mind.
She will always be on your side.
She's a fighter and a lover.
She holds a grudge.
She misses you.
She hates to be wrong.
She likes a good heart-warming movie.
She can cry over a good song.
She feels with more than just her heart and her head, she feels with her soul.
The intensity with which she feels sometimes makes her afraid.
She longs to be someone.
She listens with her heart.
She's honest, she doesn't mince words... she tells it like it is.
She often puts her foot in her mouth.
She cries when she's angry and when she's really hurt.
She's had a broken heart.
She means what she says.
She loves to touch and be touched.
Forever is never long enough.
Author notes
More of a list than a real poem but I needed to let it out.
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good
She's had a broken heart.
She means what she says.
She loves to touch and be touched.
Forever is never long enough.
I havn`t read you in a while
Nice to look inside
Miss you
Rick
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I knew this felt familiar, a pleasure to stop by and read yet again. Hope to see new pieces soon, miss you ~Tia
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I think its wonderful, as we will read and listen and never find fault with you. youknow what you need and i wish you success in your venture.
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You're a Real Woman
You just described what a real woman should be. I really like the poem because it comes straight from your heart and that is poetry. I would love to have a woman like you in my life and I wish I did. Most of the women around me are not real and don't know how to be real. I will make you one of my favorites so I can read more of your poems. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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So sweet and powerful
So relatable I feel like it was written about me! I really enjoyed it.
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At first I wasn't sure if this was a painful piece, but it's growing on me and I can see that through this sort of 'confession', if you will, it's trying to peel away the shell and really give a sense of oneself to someone who may not realize everything there is.
nice and subtle
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i thought that this was heartfelt, especially because you gave each tear a purpose, because each tear should, there are many things that we cry about and each tear showed that! Sometimes there are too many emotions for one to handle. good write
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First, let me thank you for entering my contest.
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This poem was very touching. The flow and imagery was very well done. -
Great raw emotion in this poem. I love the concept "If my tears had a voice" Very sad but beautiful. Great ending line "Forever is never long enough" Very powerful and moving write. =) Keep it up and thank you so much for your comment on my poem!
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that is soo sweet. I really like it a lot and I agree with this, with all of it. Good job and keep it up.
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This was great!
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Wonderful
Nikki, I really enjoyed this! This is a spill from your soul that will be absorbed by your...someone special I am certain! This was wonderful. I enjoyed reading and learning about you even more than I expected when I clicked on your piece. Hope you had a fabulous Holiday and I will catch up with you soon. Back to work with ton's on my plate right now! When the dust settles...I will send an email, promise! Can't wait for my next trip to Indy
~Tia
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writers block sucks
This poem is about your heart, yet it seems to be missing that very thing. Perhaps trying a scramble to see what might come out? -
honestly written.
wonderful all encompassing feeling.
easy to read,easier to take to heart.
thanks for sharing your thoughts.
alan.
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so honest, so refreshing. i think this is fantastic!!!
I can identify with almost everything in your list, making the poem even better for me to read. Love it. Well done and keep on loving with that huge heart.
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I think I'm in love with you.
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ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE
My Goodness Girl!!!!! Wow!!
first let me say, hello and I hope all went well over the Holidays....we really need to do some catching up....lots to tell.....
Second this is an amazing write. So freaking perfect that it gives me chills. Written from the soul and I feel you. This is a beautifully written poem, and one of my very very favorites. I love....love love it!
Okay, anyway....let's talk....miss you!
you poet you!!!!
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