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extra pounds

These extra pounds
keep weighing me down
I've got to lose them
so I can feel free

I've tried this before
but been kicked to the floor
this time I really mean it
and will succeed!

A contest entry

written in like five minutes, lemme know if it sucks

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  • Barbara gold member
    January 3, 2007

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    Cute little poem. Good luck on having the willpower to succeed in your resolution.

    Thank you for entering, and good luck with the contest.