I was wrong for lying,
I was wrong for cheating,
I just don't know how to repair things,
I was the snake of deception,
I did not lie about how I loved you,
I just decieved and blammed you,
and I'm sorry for all that.
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked this, it was a very powerful piece and it wasnt overly long, i believe your a good poet
keep up the good writting
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So much said in so little words, and they are very emotional, filled with sadness and regret, I really enjoyed reading this, if you need someone to talk to feel free This was touching, I'm hoping you overcome, remember where mistakes are made, corrections can be made also.
MxA
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really good
for some reason i find my self saddend y this poem its not just that iv had this happen its the thought of what was done that makes me sad
i think you wrote this really well
keep up the gud work hun
Ciao
luv ya
marty
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This is a really good way to show how you feel without saying much about it. I think that maybe, just maybe, you will get through to this one guy. But if not, I'm sorry for your loss.
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