silence reigned
and they all got wet
except me
because i was wrapped in thought
Author notes
I absolutely love this and have said it to myself many times in my life.
A contest entry
- I Want Your Lifes' Motto In Five Lines Or Less by 2lullabyhaven.
600 points, ended June 10, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good one petra.. you can wrap me around yourlittle finger
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clever
such a fun play on words. love it! -
Wow
This is for sure a though teaser.
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Beautifully expressed!
You write some very good poetry. I like the way this one played out. Not only is it clever, but it has some great imagery. I am pondering this one as I write. Like it very much, I can see how you would keep this one close and come back to it repeatedly. A fine expression. Jadon
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Dear Jadon
This is my absolute favorite and I meditate on it. I wrote this poem when I was as young as I can remember. Your comment was lovely. Thank you so much.
Kia ora e arohanui,
Petratani
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Dear Petra, Good thinking.
I like the last line, it says it all.
lovely poem, I hope to read more from you.
Joan
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I like this a lot!!! Shows how one can be lost in thought and oblivious to all around!!!! Look forward to reading more from you!! Keep that pen flowing, and Welcome to AP!!!!!!!
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Dear Petra
I just found my way to your site.
Congratulations of a fine first poem.
Love and hugs, XXX Hue.
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