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The Crown of Iniquity

O to be a jewel in the crown of iniquity.
In apathetic vigil I standby idly otiose.
Yea how can a pawn ideate repose?
The breastplate if corruption protects the sovereign.
The masses remain complacent.
The world is defiled by putrid emperors.
Disguising their folly’s in the name of politics.
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Amera

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  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007
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    yep, yep, and YEP!!i say that this is actually one of the best poems you have written...well one of them since you have written a lot...i donno why i say that...but it just..is...i think...haha... GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!


  • Im3
    January 8, 2007

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    I liked this verse, "The breastplate if corruption protects the sovereign." Reminds me of bible verse Ephesians 6 10-17. My favorite verse. Nicely done with wonderful thoughts to transpose


  • green mother rose
    January 2, 2007
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    ohhhhh yeah!

    Well- not sure what to write. I was returning the favor of mastering minding one of your writes.. And to me this is just not long enough. But what is here I like. It is true. And the more I re read it.. I like it more.. Blessed Be!
    Green Mother Rose