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Swing, Little Sister (For Kay)




Swing High
into the sky
above the world
beautiful girl
swing your heart out
have fun and shout
while you're young
have all the fun
Swing all day long
birds sing a song
look at her swing
worry about nothing
sweet girl smile
laughter for awhile
Kiss the sun
special one
Kay in your swing
enjoy everything
all is alright
your world is bright

Author notes

This is about one of my A?P sis's, Kay Anders

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  • Puppydog gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    SO BRIGHT AND HAPPY!

    He describes you so well here, to me you seem to always be bright and cheery and seeing the world as this bright and beautiful place. Do enjoy each and every day for they go by so very fast.


  • workingharleylady
    March 19, 2007
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    wonderful

    BEAUTIFUL POEM. ALL THE WAY THROUGH WOULD'NT CHANGE A WORD. (sorry accidental cap's)


  • RiNgMaSt3r
    January 3, 2007
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    I likes this its pretty coolio monolio!


  • passionate-poet
    January 2, 2007
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    awww

    that is so totally sweet!! good imagry as well thanks for sharing!


  • Moqui Takoda
    January 2, 2007
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    this is a good one to my AP Niece

    thank you for this sweet well-written poem for Kay Anders, my AP Niece. She is just like that and the poem swings like a swing and it is in the sun, too. I love the background. Good work. jesusgun


  • BlessedAngel
    January 2, 2007

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    Precious!

    I loved this my friend....so precious and written so perfectly...great job....keep the ink flowing...smiles, Terry
  • Kay Laon Anders
    January 2, 2007
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    Ah!!!

    This is so sweet dude!...no one has ever wrote a poem for me before....I will now put the whole thing on my page..lol...thanks so very much...now I have to write one for you...it might take a few days though..lol

    KAY

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