By grace of darkness,
We let things fall,
By grace of darkness,
Death shall claim them all.
By grace of darkness,
Let shadows spread,
By grace of darkness,
Until they all lie dead.
By grace of darkness,
Truth shall fail,
By grace of darkness,
It is pitty that we shall all hail!
By grace of darkness,
Pillars of life come crashing down,
By grace of darkness,
Happiness and love we shall let drown.
By grace of darkness,
We come accustom to pain,
By grace of darkness,
Beyond agreement, far from sane.
By grace of darkness,
Ruin my life as I may,
By grace of darkness,
"befriend the darkness I say!"
By grace of darkness,
Let tears drop,
By grace of darkness,
Because I know that I they will never stop.
By grace of darkness,
Sadly, it is true,
By grace of darkness,
All of this because I could not forget you.
A contest entry
- Darkness Rhymes Too by Dark Whispers.
321 points, ended April 6, 2007, 27 entries
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300 points, ended May 22, 2007, 17 entries
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This is interesting..but it's more of a heart broken poem. It's good, but not what I'm looking for. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this was a great write...i really enjoyed reading this..your words were strong, powerful and emotional as well...keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
Thank you for your entry, Josephine
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I like this, although I think the repeatative line should have been separated by two other lines rather than 1, I think it would be stronger. Thanks for entering
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The line "by the grace of darkness" was repeated to many times in my own opinion. you should try a different way to express your message rether than repeat the same again and again.
thaks for entering though.
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