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Subconcious

You drift in and out of thought
Losing  sight of that you sought
Write your soul out  on your page
I see your confusion  pain and rage
You bare  your fears in your wording
It sears the  subconsious in wandering
And baits the mind  to  endless plunders
Showing  inside  your  own hidden  wonders
Keep an open  mind when you  share  a thought
One of these times you'll see what you have got.

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Option 3.
wakingdevil
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  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    Didactic Wisdom

    A wise message offering guidance that is a good response to the inspirational piece. Goog job, and good luck!
    xxoo
    dk


  • Violent Serenity
    January 2, 2007

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    Woah

    nice work, i like your style, you have earned your place in my favorites list amo! keep up the simply amazing work!!!
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