I feel so sexy when you are near
Whispering sweet nothings in my ear
Stroking my neck and feeling my hair
This is a moment only two can share
Your lips journey down to touch my breast
Putting self control right to the test
Nipples standing like puppies wanting a drink
You are impressed, at least thats what i think
Slowly you move down between my thighs
And all i can do is let out sweet sighs
I know you are good, maybe even the best
As you work wonders on my Treasure Chest
I get so excited and ever so wet
A better feeling i could not possibly get
Accidently, i then go into a spasm
Oh what a feeling,what an orgasm
Then you roll me over so sensually
Spread my legs,gently entering me
As you quicken and become quite fast
I think,how long can this moment last
It is the best moment under the sun
When two people, come together as one
It is such a feeling of sexual pleasure
A moment in life we all need to treasure
Nothing in the world could be any better
Than at this moment as we cum together
The ultimate feeling is too hard to explain
As our bodily juices begin to drain
Its over now, we are a spent force
Thankyou God for inventing intercourse
Lay back now ,some sleep will be fine
I`ll treasure this moment,till next time
Off to fairyland now and to my dreams
Each time is better,with you it seems
So now Darling,time to kiss me goodnight
Wrap your arms around me and hold me so tight
Tomorrow,we know will be another day
Maybe we can start it, exactly the same way
Perhaps just a long kiss and a bit of a touch
But for tonight dear,I thankyou so much
In a list
A contest entry
- Wow me Sensually or Erotically. by Poetic Aphrodite.
425 points, ended January 6, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lesbian Erotica -- There Needs To Be More!!! by Sesheta.
700 points, ended September 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Relationships of all Types by RockChick.
600 points, ended October 2, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensual Feelings/ Adults Only by piccola.
700 points, ended October 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmm this is just a lil scrummy is it not? just enough to send a crazy poet a lil fuzzy inside...you really are a very diverse poet
Im impressed
take a bow my poet friend
T
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Scrummy?
Not sure what you mean there
You liked it though?
ThankYou
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mmmmm
this is divine, and a very good write indeed!
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wit woooooooo, this is lovely and sensual and the flow is so soft like the words you have penned.
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You received many kudos for this piece.. i would have to agree that you have flair for erotic poetry and it shows! I felt as if i were the one who just had that orgasm....
Enticing.....*rose* becca
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I dont usually read erotica (blatant lie) and the fact that I clicked this (despite the label of adult) was a total mistake (blantant lie) .....but since I was here I chose to read, and....DAMN....Good stuff....I noticed you have a Gold membership and can most likely see how long I was here reading this....and for the record I was only checking for spelling errors and the like. 
(your all good, lol)
Great write.
Jamie
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I love this...very sexy, very sensual. You certainly did a good job at arousing my senses here...so so erotic. Great work.
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amazing
i love this poem its like a mind orgasim just readin i no sounds weird but its great lol hope i didnt offend u but thats my verdict -
wow
its as if you were writing as you had sex....amazing..keep it up!!
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Wow..very sensual..I love it..you have a way with painting words..great job!
Whispers
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Your poetry is always such a treat to read! I loved the strong rhyme scheme in this... the flow is very smooth and of course the poem itself is very arousing. Wonderful job darling.
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i like this one
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this was a contest for "soft sensualty" the write is more erotic. Thanks though.
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WOW what a great entry in this contest
Well done and good luck in the contest
delila
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Wow.....I should give this to my husband one day. LOL! I like how it started off sensual and then became really romantic. That's the way it's supposed to be. Whenever I get married, I hope we have fun like this!
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Beautifully written with some great imagery here.
Thanks a lot for sharing this and best of luck
in this contest!
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Omg,I forgot I commented and applauded before...haha!! oh well!!
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Does that mean you liked it?
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Geez.
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Also, BaByMaMa is apparently quite illiterate; I would never, ever want to have sex with her. That's right, my previous comment was sarcasm, people. I know, who woulda thunk, right? God, what a bunch of suck-ups you people are.
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Had to check out another one. Gotta say... your prose is impeccable.
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oh my god! ok, i NEED SEX now lol!!! great poem!
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I`m glad u liked my poem.Hope you got some sex?
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lol, but I better stop reading this hehe!!! gettin turned on, ur lanuage is so... erotic.. very john dunne hehe!! xx
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yet again i'm afraid this write is not in the right category as dirty pretty, but thanks for entering your write.
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thank you God for inventing intercourse. this was a beautiful poem at least you write beautiful poems and I saw you viewed a few of my pieces, so you was being noisy so i am returning the same pleasure (lol) but this was a nice read you rocked it
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Wonderful Visions...
What a delicious write
Images are protruding vividly!!!
Thanks for sharing....hehe...
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i`m glad you liked it
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i am glad you liked my poem.ty for your support
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good
it's a good poem, i like it.. keep up the good work...
red roses
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thankyou
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I am interested in this as I just LOVE lezzie poems! Not as much as lezzie videos, naturally. I will send you a link to one of my own offerings on this subject if you wish! In the meantime I shall add you onto my favourites list if you are not already there, that is. And a little bit of clap.
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Yes please send me a link on your offerings about Lezzies.
I`m glad you enjoyed my poem
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I love the take you took on this piece, it's not only creative but very enticing thankyou for your submittal, Bella
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Thankyou please keep in touch
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Thankyou,I`m glad you enjoyed it
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