Hold me gently in your shrouds,
braid your hair and let me climb.
Then come with me into the clouds,
forgetting all of human time.
Dare we dance amongst the stars,
where all the gods are sitting round?
Can we soothe the comet’s scars
and still outrun the haunting sounds?
Lost forever in your eyes,
embedded deep within your might.
You are the light that’s in my skies
forever gleaming in my sight.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love by individuality.
1800 points, ended January 2, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really hope I could write just like u... "you are the light that's in my skies..."This line of the poem really made me fall in love.... GREAT JOB.... -
Beautiful
Such beautiful words you write in your love poems.
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Oh, this has nice flow to it. It is very rhythmic and even. The wording is wonderful.
Congratulations on the placing.
Thank you for sharing.
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butiful n congrats on the shiney smiles ~cheeky~
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Aww this was so beautiful and pretty. You've done a great job and congrats on your silver trophy. Very well deserved...
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Congratulations
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a good piece, a good rhythm and flow and a soothing poem. i thank you kindly for entering your poetic piece and good luck to you in this contest - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Thanks
I thank you very kindly for the points and silver shinny
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I love the line braid your hair and let me climb. Good luck in the contest
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Yes a fine love poem with a sense of spirituality
There is no forced rhyme, it flows like a song. Well done
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