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Comfort In... You

She ran,
Escaping from what she feared,
The more she runs,
The more I pull her back.

'Smothered' she says
'Empty' I say

Fate kills us,
Bringing us together then destroying us once more…

Faster…

No more,
I can’t run from my fear- losing you
All I can do is
Hope,
Wish,
That fate doesn’t kill us anymore

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  • waywardheart
    August 16, 2007

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    that is a relatable situation that i have been in.(and am currently tyring to get out of) but fate won't stop. ha. i loved this poem. sweet. simple. short.