standing on a highrise
just cant go on
running from this life i despise
just so cold and long
looking back on things
at the ever so sad past
cursing the master that pulls the strings
swearing today is my last
looking down at the pavement
playing thoughts over in my head
subdueing my hearts lement
ready to be dead
Standing on a highrise
ready to fall
thinking of my past
trying to forget it all
running out of ways to vent
the reaper in my midst
going over the painful events
to many to list
so i leave this note for you
to give you the reasons why
it was the last thing i wanted to do
but i have to say goodbye
Standing on a highrise
thinking of what was said
saying my final goodbyes
when you read this ill be dead
standing on a highrise
stepping closer to the ledge
putting a stop to my cries
i quietly step off the edge
A contest entry
- Please let me die i promise it wont hurt 3> by beautyamoungblades.
305 points, ended April 22, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Feel Dark by Xsafety glassX.
375 points, ended April 29, 2007, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - X.x.X-End-This-Life-X.x.X by XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX.
750 points, ended July 25, 2008, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow this was amazing. you have a good shot. so good luck in my contest!
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this was a really great write..a little hard to read on the background but still good and it flowed really smoothly keep writting your very talented
~Chrissy~ -
YAY!! SUICIDE!!
i luv it!! so emotional and dark...the only word i can think of is awesome and to describe the ENTIRE poem id have to write awesome like a hundred times!!
thanx for entering my contest!!
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