Lips embrace
Hearts begin to race
Tongues join, dancing
Spirits raise, prancing
Loving arms surround
Our love is free and unbound
Skin touches skin
Emotions swell within
Spirituality takes control
Joining soul to soul
Eternal spiritual bliss
Begins anew each time we kiss
Author notes
Euphoric
A contest entry
- tender-hearted by honey bear.
550 points, ended February 1, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~MAKE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
475 points, ended February 24, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Euphoria by Loveprevails.
530 points, ended January 7, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so beautiful =)
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You're a finalist
again thank you for your entry!
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This is a beautiful poem. Skin touches skin, emotions swell within..I loved that line. What a sweet and simple way to describe the euphoria of love. Thank you so much for entering and good luck to you
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Beautiful poem. Rhyming is excellent. It is unfortunate that sometimes love falls apart and crumbles beneath you, and everything you counted on toppled onto you, leaving you with nothing but soliloquies.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
Happy New Year!
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I love this jeb. Great job, its so sweet
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A short and lovely write!
I could just picture an image while reading it.It realy says a lot about loving someone. It is very touching and very true about how you feel towards the one you love.
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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I love it. III know how you feell. Juust when happiness comess something takkkse it away.
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thank you for entering with this very passion filled write
good work this is very descriptive good luck in the contest with this very powerful love poem
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hard to believe you're angry nd depressed after readin that. this is beautiful. addin the picture kinda enhances the effect of your words...neat..and thanks for the comment pal...appreciate it
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Wicked
Wonderful the way you entwined kissing and dancing; 'tis very suitable. The poem flows beautifully, and there's alot of happiness in it; quite a change from your others, but it works well for you. :3 Involving spiritualness made this poem more then something physical; awesome job. -
great
to feel a love like this... man i'd almost give anything. lol. glad to see you feel that way. this poem is great. shows how you truly feel towards her. good job!
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