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Feelings of You Inside

I prayed to God
for a real man like you.
I was lost, lonely,
down and feeling blue.

The first day I met you,
I could already see.
What was this poison
inside of me.

A feeling of passion
rushing through my veins.
Love at first sight
driving me insane.

Till one day you asked me
if you could be my man.
Holding me close.
Holding my hands.

Falling asleep in your
arms every night.
Waking up and you
still holding me tight.

At first I thought
you were playing with my emotions.
But now I know what making love is
when you rub me down in lotions.

Now I find myself
in a bind.
Then I look to my left,
and find you by my side.

I tore down the worn
wall around my heart.
Even though it's
just the start.

I trust that you
will never leave.
For your love I
will never decieve.

I want to be
with you forever.
I want to be your
Mrs. Elza

I'm married woot!!!!

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  • I will stand by you
    February 5, 2007
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    this is beautiful. keep up the good work.


  • blueyez
    January 4, 2007
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    This was a very cute write! Good luck with your awesome love!


  • xXblackRoseXx
    January 3, 2007
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    sweet

    Thats amazing!! I really like "I want to be with you forever. I want to be your Mrs. Elza" I think you wrote the whole poem really well!! And thanks for the comment you left, I don't really care about the length!


  • Shattered- Heart
    January 3, 2007
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    great write