Mmmmm....
Baybe your not mine to have
Still I want you oh so bad
Your touch upon my cheek, my hips
The taste of your warm chest, your lips
Ohhhh....
Baybe your not mine to kiss
To drink the toxin you dismiss
To taste the essence, in breath on fire
To drown with, in eternal desire
Mmmmm....
Baybe your not mine to hold
To whisper secrets never told
To brush your hair ebony mess
To feel, to massage and to caress
Ohhhh....
Baybe your not mine to serve
To pleasure till you lose your nerve
To lay with warm and cuddle at night
To make love to when bodies are tight
Mmmmm..
Baybe when I lay to sleep
My bodies touched extremely deep
My nerves quiver and sheets they shake
Shhhh.. not too loud or I might wake
I'm standing silent, you walk in
My eyes flash with the sweetest sin
You see the hunger in my sight
The tongue hoping to taste a bite
You smile and you laugh a bit
Walk slowly, you tell me to sit
I obey and you lay me down
You melt me with each dripping sound
We kiss with tongue and passion hot
You know I want all that you've got
You edge me on the bed some more
Mmmmmm....a whisper "Fuck me till I'm sore"
You rip my shirt off, rough and quick
Your hands on my thighs, soft and slick
You kiss my chest, slide hands beneath
You unhook my bra so breasts are free
You slide your hands under skirt to waist
Pull silk panties down, but without haste
You trace their path with tender kiss
Sending my senses into bliss
You stop before you go to far
Taunting me with your breath of fire
You lick my tummy and kiss it sweet
Then trail your gentle lips up higher
You lick my nipples and nibble light
You feel them harden, twisting tight
You place your hands to calm them some
I whimper as pleasure leaves me numb
You walk away and leave me in sensation
I follow without hesitation
In the shower you tell me to lay
You'll be right back but I should stay
You return with a bag of tricks
Growl in my ear and lick your lips
I breath hard at the simple thought
Wondering what toys you brought
You strip your clothes down to your hips
You continue and I lick my lips
When bare you make the water steam
So hot that I can't help but scream
You kiss my lips and climb over me
You taste so sweet and heavenly
Your bend down slight, your hips brush mine
but then you pull back just in time
The teasing makes me lose control
Insatiable cravings take their toll
I knock you down,
I kiss your neck and bite
You whisper, "Baybe, slow it down
there's no need to fight."
The voice melts me into a trance
You lightly take me in your hands
Place me on my back and make me hold
Reluctantly, I do as I'm told
You light candles and shut out the light
Like stars that twinkle in the night
Your eyes shimmer and smile glows
Taunting the haunting need that grows
You walk back with bottle in hand
You pull me up until I stand
Rubbing chocolate all around
Then slam me back onto the ground
You lick my thighs up to my hips
I moan a bit, you kiss my lips
You bit my neck and nibble on my ears
Pain and pleasure almost bringing tears
You drink hot chocolate till none is left
My breath being the greater theft
You moan and growl with voice divine
It sends a shiver down my spine
I quiver from one end to end
Causing my breath to cease
You kiss lips, pull me up again
Hands let go, bitter release
You grab silver out of your bag
"Now love that wasn't nice."
You pull my hands above the shower head
I hear the clicking twice
Waterfalls of crystal lava, evaporating on my skin
A heat that overpowers and devours me within
You place your hands upon my waist,
then lips upon my shoulder
You suck my neck, I breath in harsh,
as need hits like a boulder
You bite down hard making me whimper quietly once again
I try my best to hold it back, my body won't let me pretend
You nibble on my ear and blow
your hair, so soft, brushes my cheek
You whisper words to make skin crawl
to leave me begging weak
"Do you know who's in charge yet?
Or should I continue to tease?"
I shake my head and whisper yes
"C'mon Baybe Can you say please"
You kiss my neck one more time
then my lips to tangle tongues
I answer quick with lips release
with slimming breath left in my lungs
You grab your bag and brings it near
Pulling out a velvet strap
You wrap the collar round my neck
A diamond crested trap
You frees my hands from overhead
then put me in my place
Connect a chrome chain to my neck
and whispers "Just in case."
Still dripping wet, we make our way to the bedroom
You turn off the light and close the door
You slams me up against the wall
"Tonight love, your my whore."
You drop the chain and grab my legs
Locking them around your waist with ease
"Your pleasure before my own
but then down on your knees."
You push closer, pushing in, only to the tip
I moan your name, but you pull out, and loosen thighs that grip
You lay me down on silk and lace, a pillow to rest my head
With petals sprinkled all around, you climb onto the bed
A blindfold circles eyes with ebony
To intense what sense savor
You kiss me and your tongue entwines
Basking me, your my favorite flavor
"Bang me." you laugh light in my ear
My muscles tighten against my will
Panting and soaked you trace my sides
sending my heart a chill
You spread my legs till open wide
sight leaves no truth to be denied
As your fingers slowly slide
Deep in my slippery wet confides
I moan and you pull out the same
Little by little as I call your name
You nibble on tight drowning lips
I scream as in your smooth tongue slips
Probing the depths, exploring sides
You kiss and suck, patiently glide
As I quake with pleasure you invade
escape, and then I wish you'd stayed
You take off the blindfold and switch your place
My eyes look down upon your face
I feel your pulse quicken with desire
Blood rushes fast setting my flesh on fire
You kiss my chest and align your body with mine
hush my lips that quiver "You'll be fine."
Hands on my hips push quickly down
A thrust so deep I shout
You pull back till just the tip is in
A finger used to hush my mouth
"Before I fuck you till you burst.
A little drink to quench your thirst."
Pulling out again you grabs the chain in hand
"Baybe, your wish is my command."
I lick your head, your breath is rapid
I kiss the top and blow air light
You groan and harden up a bit
but wait I want to do this right
I fill each inch within my lips
sucking soft and you pull my hair
I blow again and tension builds
I feel your craving flare
I use my tongue to lick and probe
till moans escape to leave you hollow
You quiver and then sugar sweet
I'm sure it's more than pride I swallow
After release you push me back
face first onto the sheets
You catch your breath and chain me quick
As fast as my heart beats
You position and you warn me once
"Beautiful, this might hurt."
You enter from back, ache spreads quick
almost enough to burst
The feelings deep that thrash and thrust
grow on me as they multiply
The groans pleasure and reality busts
leaving our bodies less than dry
I dig my nails in the silk
your own claws on my hips
My thighs are aching, pussy pulsing
as dew drips from the petals lips
I feel you pull out and unchain my arms
The pain still lingers light
"Mmmm, See, sexy. Not so bad.
Your wet." you whisper "Now, let's see how tight."
I crawl on top again, you touch my thighs
tease my pussy's lips dripping with need
You slide only the tip inside
you pause although I beg and plead
My hands trace your chest as you push in more
I scratch and blood trickles thin
You laugh and growl and grab my hips
thrusting all the way in
I scream you name and moan for more
rough riding you give in
Our bodies quake and dams, they break
until we drip with sin
You bite my nipples, tease my breast
I kiss and lick and suck your chest
You thrust in so far I'm almost ripped apart
I'm sure I felt it hit my heart
You roll me over till your on top
as I moan "Oh Baybe please don't stop"
You ravish me with your mouth and hands divine
growling "Long as you know your mine."
Pushing in and out, you sink your fangs in deep
My neck spills pleasure with light blood that seeps
One last time you kiss lips and thrust
We're overwhelming with the truest lust
Orgasms sound echoing to wake the world
Grips tighten with our senses swirled
Boiling cum spills with ease and grace
Splashing legs, tummies, hands and face
We gasp for breath and lay down release
surprised we both lay in one piece
"I love you."I pant
you kiss me "I'm glad."
We contemplate silent, what we'd just had
We lay pleasured and paining,
hot and sweaty to the core
No actions need explaining
within our heart and soul we soar
Eyes open wide when ringing sounds
I search until the culprits found
"Hello Angel" I answer normal as expected
Hoping my red hands aren't detected
"Hey beautiful." Your voice is on the other line
I say, "Yeah sweetheart, I'm just fine."
While in my mind I hear the truth
My tongue is, but the sweetest sleuth
Mmmmm..no.. Please don't ask.. I shalln't confess
My Ebony Angel, I want you bad
The way we soar in my darkness.
Oh.. Baybe..
your not mine to have.
Baybe your not mine to have
Still I want you oh so bad
Your touch upon my cheek, my hips
The taste of your warm chest, your lips
Ohhhh....
Baybe your not mine to kiss
To drink the toxin you dismiss
To taste the essence, in breath on fire
To drown with, in eternal desire
Mmmmm....
Baybe your not mine to hold
To whisper secrets never told
To brush your hair ebony mess
To feel, to massage and to caress
Ohhhh....
Baybe your not mine to serve
To pleasure till you lose your nerve
To lay with warm and cuddle at night
To make love to when bodies are tight
Mmmmm..
Baybe when I lay to sleep
My bodies touched extremely deep
My nerves quiver and sheets they shake
Shhhh.. not too loud or I might wake
I'm standing silent, you walk in
My eyes flash with the sweetest sin
You see the hunger in my sight
The tongue hoping to taste a bite
You smile and you laugh a bit
Walk slowly, you tell me to sit
I obey and you lay me down
You melt me with each dripping sound
We kiss with tongue and passion hot
You know I want all that you've got
You edge me on the bed some more
Mmmmmm....a whisper "Fuck me till I'm sore"
You rip my shirt off, rough and quick
Your hands on my thighs, soft and slick
You kiss my chest, slide hands beneath
You unhook my bra so breasts are free
You slide your hands under skirt to waist
Pull silk panties down, but without haste
You trace their path with tender kiss
Sending my senses into bliss
You stop before you go to far
Taunting me with your breath of fire
You lick my tummy and kiss it sweet
Then trail your gentle lips up higher
You lick my nipples and nibble light
You feel them harden, twisting tight
You place your hands to calm them some
I whimper as pleasure leaves me numb
You walk away and leave me in sensation
I follow without hesitation
In the shower you tell me to lay
You'll be right back but I should stay
You return with a bag of tricks
Growl in my ear and lick your lips
I breath hard at the simple thought
Wondering what toys you brought
You strip your clothes down to your hips
You continue and I lick my lips
When bare you make the water steam
So hot that I can't help but scream
You kiss my lips and climb over me
You taste so sweet and heavenly
Your bend down slight, your hips brush mine
but then you pull back just in time
The teasing makes me lose control
Insatiable cravings take their toll
I knock you down,
I kiss your neck and bite
You whisper, "Baybe, slow it down
there's no need to fight."
The voice melts me into a trance
You lightly take me in your hands
Place me on my back and make me hold
Reluctantly, I do as I'm told
You light candles and shut out the light
Like stars that twinkle in the night
Your eyes shimmer and smile glows
Taunting the haunting need that grows
You walk back with bottle in hand
You pull me up until I stand
Rubbing chocolate all around
Then slam me back onto the ground
You lick my thighs up to my hips
I moan a bit, you kiss my lips
You bit my neck and nibble on my ears
Pain and pleasure almost bringing tears
You drink hot chocolate till none is left
My breath being the greater theft
You moan and growl with voice divine
It sends a shiver down my spine
I quiver from one end to end
Causing my breath to cease
You kiss lips, pull me up again
Hands let go, bitter release
You grab silver out of your bag
"Now love that wasn't nice."
You pull my hands above the shower head
I hear the clicking twice
Waterfalls of crystal lava, evaporating on my skin
A heat that overpowers and devours me within
You place your hands upon my waist,
then lips upon my shoulder
You suck my neck, I breath in harsh,
as need hits like a boulder
You bite down hard making me whimper quietly once again
I try my best to hold it back, my body won't let me pretend
You nibble on my ear and blow
your hair, so soft, brushes my cheek
You whisper words to make skin crawl
to leave me begging weak
"Do you know who's in charge yet?
Or should I continue to tease?"
I shake my head and whisper yes
"C'mon Baybe Can you say please"
You kiss my neck one more time
then my lips to tangle tongues
I answer quick with lips release
with slimming breath left in my lungs
You grab your bag and brings it near
Pulling out a velvet strap
You wrap the collar round my neck
A diamond crested trap
You frees my hands from overhead
then put me in my place
Connect a chrome chain to my neck
and whispers "Just in case."
Still dripping wet, we make our way to the bedroom
You turn off the light and close the door
You slams me up against the wall
"Tonight love, your my whore."
You drop the chain and grab my legs
Locking them around your waist with ease
"Your pleasure before my own
but then down on your knees."
You push closer, pushing in, only to the tip
I moan your name, but you pull out, and loosen thighs that grip
You lay me down on silk and lace, a pillow to rest my head
With petals sprinkled all around, you climb onto the bed
A blindfold circles eyes with ebony
To intense what sense savor
You kiss me and your tongue entwines
Basking me, your my favorite flavor
"Bang me." you laugh light in my ear
My muscles tighten against my will
Panting and soaked you trace my sides
sending my heart a chill
You spread my legs till open wide
sight leaves no truth to be denied
As your fingers slowly slide
Deep in my slippery wet confides
I moan and you pull out the same
Little by little as I call your name
You nibble on tight drowning lips
I scream as in your smooth tongue slips
Probing the depths, exploring sides
You kiss and suck, patiently glide
As I quake with pleasure you invade
escape, and then I wish you'd stayed
You take off the blindfold and switch your place
My eyes look down upon your face
I feel your pulse quicken with desire
Blood rushes fast setting my flesh on fire
You kiss my chest and align your body with mine
hush my lips that quiver "You'll be fine."
Hands on my hips push quickly down
A thrust so deep I shout
You pull back till just the tip is in
A finger used to hush my mouth
"Before I fuck you till you burst.
A little drink to quench your thirst."
Pulling out again you grabs the chain in hand
"Baybe, your wish is my command."
I lick your head, your breath is rapid
I kiss the top and blow air light
You groan and harden up a bit
but wait I want to do this right
I fill each inch within my lips
sucking soft and you pull my hair
I blow again and tension builds
I feel your craving flare
I use my tongue to lick and probe
till moans escape to leave you hollow
You quiver and then sugar sweet
I'm sure it's more than pride I swallow
After release you push me back
face first onto the sheets
You catch your breath and chain me quick
As fast as my heart beats
You position and you warn me once
"Beautiful, this might hurt."
You enter from back, ache spreads quick
almost enough to burst
The feelings deep that thrash and thrust
grow on me as they multiply
The groans pleasure and reality busts
leaving our bodies less than dry
I dig my nails in the silk
your own claws on my hips
My thighs are aching, pussy pulsing
as dew drips from the petals lips
I feel you pull out and unchain my arms
The pain still lingers light
"Mmmm, See, sexy. Not so bad.
Your wet." you whisper "Now, let's see how tight."
I crawl on top again, you touch my thighs
tease my pussy's lips dripping with need
You slide only the tip inside
you pause although I beg and plead
My hands trace your chest as you push in more
I scratch and blood trickles thin
You laugh and growl and grab my hips
thrusting all the way in
I scream you name and moan for more
rough riding you give in
Our bodies quake and dams, they break
until we drip with sin
You bite my nipples, tease my breast
I kiss and lick and suck your chest
You thrust in so far I'm almost ripped apart
I'm sure I felt it hit my heart
You roll me over till your on top
as I moan "Oh Baybe please don't stop"
You ravish me with your mouth and hands divine
growling "Long as you know your mine."
Pushing in and out, you sink your fangs in deep
My neck spills pleasure with light blood that seeps
One last time you kiss lips and thrust
We're overwhelming with the truest lust
Orgasms sound echoing to wake the world
Grips tighten with our senses swirled
Boiling cum spills with ease and grace
Splashing legs, tummies, hands and face
We gasp for breath and lay down release
surprised we both lay in one piece
"I love you."I pant
you kiss me "I'm glad."
We contemplate silent, what we'd just had
We lay pleasured and paining,
hot and sweaty to the core
No actions need explaining
within our heart and soul we soar
Eyes open wide when ringing sounds
I search until the culprits found
"Hello Angel" I answer normal as expected
Hoping my red hands aren't detected
"Hey beautiful." Your voice is on the other line
I say, "Yeah sweetheart, I'm just fine."
While in my mind I hear the truth
My tongue is, but the sweetest sleuth
Mmmmm..no.. Please don't ask.. I shalln't confess
My Ebony Angel, I want you bad
The way we soar in my darkness.
Oh.. Baybe..
your not mine to have.
Author notes
Yeah....Roar. ;] tahe. I think this poem speaks for itself. I would LOVE to do all of that ^_^ BUT then, of course, your not mine to have ;] I hope you all enjoyed this poem and I've never really tried writing an erotic story in this form, so please comment and if you must then be a bit critical. =]
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Jo there is great intensity in this piece. You take it from not being able to have to the dream or fantasy. Luring and seductivly and then back once again to reality. Well done, a piece that goes full circle. Great write and intense imagery. Rhyme and meter well done. Only one suggestion, the backround makes it difficult in many places to read and as much as I love it..wonder if maybe you should either change the font or the image so that it is easier for another to read. Just a suggestion. Wonderfully done. Dawn
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REALLY good
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Tahe
OOOOOOOOOOOO I feel so naughty! But thisis worth being in deep shit with my parents. the rhyme, the story, all fit together perfectly

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I approve but it doesn't matter what I say anyway I love the flow and the wording in the poem you did well on the flow of the story as well I lose myself a bit in it but its because of the color of your words and the way they overlap the image of the background so my eyes had a hard time focusing some, But beyond that i'm not complaining... And At least now I know what your doing when I call and you awnser as you do

Later
Romeo




