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~~Distant Heartbeats~~

How much do I love you?
How much love can there be?
You ask me if my love is real
And how do I know
I only know I love you more
Each day that comes along
You are there, here with me
Apart by distance together in love
I want you to know, so it is very clear
You have become my one and only dear
So my love I tell you my feelings deep
That you are with me even in my sleep
Images of you are with me every night
As my longings and dreams take flight
As I fall asleep whispering your name
Do you think it’s a joke?
Here I go falling in love again
In poetry, I try to show you my love
You’re written on my heart
And on my inner walls
It is so very strange but true
So my dear remember these words
Our words of love will always be heard
You live half continent away
But this distance will never matter
I can feel your love from afar
I write my words so you may see more clearly
What you mean to me, all that you are
I try to paint you a picture of my heart
With words, which is the only way I know
You read the words, this I know you do
But listen to them as well
There is more behind them, if you can see
A story of my love for you they tell
It is my destiny and fate
That I must wait
Until were together
Soon it won’t be just a dream
I’ll hold you in my arms
You’ll speak those words of love
And I’ll taste all your charms


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~~SWEETANGELGRACE~~

Can you hear my heart calling to yours? Can you feel what I write?
This is for you..It is hard to express what I feel so here I am painting a picture of my passions revealed of a soul dedicated to you..You're my only one who is quite unreachable, just like the stars in the sky...so until were together

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • onesugar gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Beautiful..love conquers all obstacles...you can't help who you fall in love with..your heart knows.

    All the best in the contest
    ~sugar~


  • Cannonsfire
    January 5, 2008

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    Love knows no boundaries or distance, because a heart that calls to another is always heard by that person, I don't know how but it is a feeling one gets when they are in love. This is such a lovely piece full of emotion and hope. Love, Chez


  • forever and ever
    January 2, 2008

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    AMAZING write!! i feel just like this. and this is EXACTLY what i want to say to him. if only he knew. thank you for entering and good luck. and a very happy new year to you as well. Keep up the great work!!


  • Blooming Poet
    December 22, 2007
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    May I ask you to include your username, in your author notes. It is optional, but i would like it.


  • Blooming Poet
    December 13, 2007

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    I love the picture you used on your poem it is very pretty.I am looking for a poem to say the right words to my boyfriend and this is exactly what am looking for. My fave lines are
    "Apart by distance together in love"
    and

    "Soon it won’t be just a dream
    I’ll hold you in my arms
    You’ll speak those words of love
    And I’ll taste all your charms"

    Actually i love the whole poem. Each line is what I want as a poem entry. You are a prelim. finalist. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    September 11, 2007
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    I loved this poem thanks so much for entering it in my contest. good luck
    xo
    kandy

  • Leaving Today
    June 22, 2007
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    Superb expression for your distant love, well done. loved your poem.


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    April 16, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful entry, bella


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 18, 2007

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    Heartfelt and so Beautiful!

    My...My...My, this is so a beautiful poem You touch my heart with this piece because it reflects the love in my life. I have a long distance love as well that is 10,000 miles away. We have long for one another for so very long and our love is so strong. I finally get to unite with her this May. I awaiting this moment that will be the best moment in my life. Your poem brought tears in my eyes. i wish you the very best with the love you share that is far away.

    Good luck in the contest!
    Much love,
    Bo


  • EmeraldDreams
    March 16, 2007

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    This is a very heartfelt piece you have written here. You can really feel the emotion pouring from your words. Thankyou very much for the entry.


  • tawk gold member
    February 22, 2007
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    Such a wonderful poem so full of love and emotions. Good luck in my contest


  • Shadow Lynx
    February 18, 2007

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    Wonderful depth of feeling you have penned here in this hearfelt write ,i hope you will be together soon thank you for entering ,good luck in the contest


  • GoodKnightPoet
    January 14, 2007

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    BRAVO

    You did it Grace! Congratulations! I'm proud of you and loved your words. Love has no boudaries or problems with distance. I can feel your words and emotions. Well done.

  • BloodStainedTears
    January 2, 2007

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    awww..this was amazing..you have showen (spelling?) your love so tender and true..I do believe that this person that you speak of must be feeling what you are saying..cause honestly..how can you not feel it..i feel for my one what you have written..and it's an amazing feeling..so your one must feel it as well..
    You are an amazing poet that has a wonderful way with words..great job and keep it up!
    -sae-


  • wings of an angel
    January 2, 2007

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    This is a lovely poem that you have penned here, I can really feel the love here and can relate your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in my contest

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