Crimson ruby's drip
Trail down ivory
Tawny locks disarrayed
Unnatural angle
Frozen in white satin sheets
Pity the graceful arch
Artistic in demise
Black dilated gaze
Raw red lusts
Cold cerulean deviant
Dark shadows
Sadistic monolith draining light
Fear the feral reaper
Butchering the pure,
and escaping through the cracks
Author notes
Just a note for those reading this and thinking its rather dark..yes it is, lol. Inspired by an unsolved murder case..it's really about the waste of such beauty, and life. With a side thread about how mankind is incapable of stopping the crimes so rampant today.
(Also just for fun, I started it with three lines containing colors used as a discription of emotion for the victim, and again for the criminal. And for those of you that know me you will find I slip my name into my poems here and there. lol)
would be option 6
and 4
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Ah yes, yes... Indeed. I have heard a couple of murder stories such as this. Waste of beauty indeed, but these murderers believe that blood and pain is beauty... It's pretty damn sick, but these madmen/woman really do work in callous and odd ways. Then again sometimes blood is beautiful, but portrayed, not laying infront of you like a pool.
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Makes you reread it and wonder which word is a girls name huh? lol Hint, it is also a color ;p
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haha
Love the author notes.. Since I don't know you, I have no clue how you actually put your name into, but hey this was good. So keep at it. I love the first stanza with all the colors and I tell you unsolved cases are an injustic, so this was great. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. Kassie. -
I appreciate the author's explanation of what you are expecting to convey. I need help with some of them.
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;p I added the authors notes just for you..I knew the poem would probably throw you off like it did Mom lol.
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