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No Longer Am I Your FRIEND-The 10 Freewrite


I HATE you for being the way you are.
So LOST you have made me become.
I'm AFRAID to say that this is over.
You are a GOSSIP freak and you and I shall FIGHT!
This RING I wear is no longer yours.
I am CHALLENGED by who you have become.
I LASH out my thoughts of you in poetry.
These WORDS are mine own.
To DEATH I shall see you in Dark Poetry I write!

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    Thought maybe this was from a word list and capital words were from that list. Little bit of anger in these lines - make one feel that anger. Easy to read and understand.

  • La.La.Lia
    January 4, 2007
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    I like the capital words. Very nice. Very spiteful.

    Don't hate me, but maybe instead of saying "poetry" use something more poetic like "I LASH out my thoughts of you in stanzas" Or something. I don't know. Forget it.


    • stormigrl
      February 13, 2007
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      Libitina

      Great thoughts on my poem, I think in my next write I'll write a Lashing out thoughtful poem. Thanks for the input.

      Marianne