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Stick-Shift Sweetheart

Stick shift sweetheart drives through the night;
all wheel angel turns left turns right;
Driving darlin’ dear, Queen of my race track;
guides me into gear, keeps me coming back.

(chorus)
    Stick shift sweetheart burns up the road;
    all wheel angel, overdrive, overload;
    Stick shift soul-mate drives me night and day;
    stick shift sweetheart takes my heart away.

Stick shift sweetheart drives her daddy down;
screams out from the light, dual-piped rumbling sound;
Stick shift siren parts the peace of the night;
stick shift lovers, bodies buckled tight.

Stick shift sweetheart accelerates the pace;
all wheel angel always wins her race;
Stick shift soul-mate with my heart in tow;
stick shift sweetheart..

go baby, go baby, Go!

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  • BabyBun silver member
    June 8

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    When I read this, it reminded me of Stephen King and some of the lyrics in his stories which help to shape his work. You have so much talent - I am in awe!


  • pania gold member
    April 27

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    Comment? What can I say? Great rhythm, pounding, in fact. She's a really good driver, by the sound of this poem - and lucky, too, by the sound of the last line.


  • Ellis gold member
    December 22, 2007
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    Coolness

    I'm glad it isn't an automatic (transmission).
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  • Cannonsfire silver member
    April 12, 2007

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    Now here I am getting packed and ready to leave, doing it slow and steady and then I read this, made me pack a little quicker, the heart beat a little faster but it sitll doesn't get me closer to you Love, Chez


  • kawaiikatiee
    March 25, 2007
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    AWESOME

    Hey thanks for your comment on my song Even Love Leaves You Now =)
    These lyrics are great! i loved the lines "Stick shift sweetheart burns up the road;all wheel angel,overdrive,overload"
    Pure awesomeness =)


  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    March 22, 2007
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    there are several ways one can take this write. i shall keep them to myself. a great play on words though. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you. viyanna rosemarie


  • Pisces Pieces silver member
    January 11, 2007

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    Where's the guitar??

    How do you write so wonderfully!? Always so unique, so interesting, and so sweetly romantic...

    Wait, are we talking about a car here yeah right, I don't think so...

    This is amazing...I love it...how could one not!

    Sorry for the lame comment...I guess it is what it is! Just telling it straight like it is I guess...


    Michele


  • ItalianPoet94
    January 7, 2007
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    I loved It

    This was such a great song.I loved it.

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!

  • Lady Ireland gold member
    January 2, 2007

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    well mat you have sure caught the rhythm in these lyrics. The metre is good and also the lyrics. all things a song requires.
    good luck.
    Slán agus oiché mhaith
    dolores.


  • SandyToo
    January 1, 2007

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    Whew! Is It Hot In Here?

    Okay, I LOVED the last line! [grin]

    Great rhythm... Um, no pun intended. What a sexy poem, Mat.

    Yeesh. Somebody turn on the air-conditioning.
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