i should talk to you about madness...
and we'll pick up stars to put in a basket
maybe i could grab a bottle of my wind
since it blows somewhere along the old reef
and yeah we'll eat up the mountain eaters
and spit them out into oblivion !
-meme si on a peur du temps qui passe
meme si les heures derriere l'horloge, se fracassent
n'y pense pas, ne t'inquiete meme pas et oublies...
imagine a spring brook and a hidden meadow
think of the unkown and take it for granted
spin ! spin !
whirlwinds and wobbles !
just make no haste, we'll get there soon...
and up we go towards cloud unseen
running under the rain and with mirth we flee
but if it's about trust, just
take the best of me
and fly !
and i, will just lie
here
wounded and weary
for i must never stop trying...
some things never change...
"lets talk about madness..
and jump on a star and let this wind blows us away
away.. away from everything..
and oblivion is only everywhere we’re not ..
we’ll meet in a place with no time and space
nothing can scare us since we’re holding hands
and “u are here and what I see is me” ..
Spin! Spin!
Whirlwinds and wobbles!
And we’ll reach the sky ..
And on a small cloud will be watchin the rain as it falls..
And we’ll fly .. and nuthin can stop us ..
Nuthin can keep us apart ..
For trust is what we have .. and what we have is trust ..
And we’ll lie there above the sky .. beyond this universe
On a star ..
Calm and serene
Some things never change .."
Author notes
the quotations are the genius and very emotionnal work of my lil fallen star
love ya lil sis
(Geoffroi de Charny)
A contest entry
- Lords and Ladies by Lone Defender.
1300 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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dreamy old dayz ..
wut had happened to you ?! -
ecstasy......
this piece flows through and true like pure honey....
well done
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if that's madness! well i hope i'll have the chance to listen more about that... excellent combination.
how wow
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Wwo what a picture you paint wiotht oyru words that also flow together so nicely. SO very soothing and such a lovely write. Good work.
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You completed what I first started, something I call "A meeting beyond the space-time" (we’ll meet in a place with no time and space, ...). Thank you, this was so comforting and relaxing. The english-french fusion is wonderful, I loved it. But I think I told you already lol.
Anyways this was one hell of a journey. Thanks amigos.
Elie
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Beautiful... you spoke for me...
I love it!!
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this was really beautiful, i enjoyed reading this, "and we'll lie there above the sky .. beyond this universe" what a pretty picture
-lys
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bona fide, real-deal, wonderful piece!
what could i possibly say that all of these people yet haven't.
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A trust of brilliance
So a wind between a dimensional door unlocked the dreams flow kindly from star to star of image and bizaar particularly in the use of another language accompanied with the unknown 'taken for granted' (I have such a desire to speak french) sets the feels of dreams so well as to open a mind a little further and so I thank you -
Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good job on this poem!! Ilike the different style of writing you have displayed here, it is one of the few that stand out from the rest. Interesting topice ,great flow in this write.What else can I say?!!!Great Job Thanks for sharing this piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Toni -
An incredible ethereal journey . . . beautifully written and there is so much music in this piece . . . loved it, bring on some more!
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"take the best of me
and fly !
and i, will just lie
here
wounded and weary
for i must never stop trying...
some things never change..."Just amazin....
I don't know what else to say...
and tephy...
I think with your words...the poem is completely mesmerizing.
Love u both.
~Hana~
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It reminds me of chaos and a sense of lost, especially with such surreal imagery. I like the last line, you always manage to paint a striking picture of morals, and exploit the message in the last lines. Yet, isn't change the imperament of everything?
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I cant deny the fact that you amaze the hell out of me with your wonderful words..
Amazing piece..
Hats off
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amazing
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lets talk about madness..
and jump on a star and let this wind blows us away
away.. away from everything..
and oblivion is only everywhere we’re not ..
we’ll meet in a place with no time and space
nothing can scare us since we’re holding hands
and “u are here and what I see is me” ..
Spin! Spin!
Whirlwinds and wobbles!
And we’ll reach the sky ..
And on a small cloud will be watchin the rain as it falls..
And we’ll fly .. and nuthin can stop us ..
Nuthin can keep us apart ..
For trust is what we have .. and what we have is trust ..
And we’ll lie there above the sky .. beyond this universe
On a star ..
Calm and serene
Some things never change ..
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me
xxx
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ur words r just amazing u make me speechless
-meme si on a peur du temps qui passe
meme si les heures derriere l'horloge, se fracassent
n'y pense pas, ne t'inquiete meme pas et oublies...
loooooved it
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i wish i can share this view of yours, wish i can try to feel so serene and away and spin till my head is heavy with my thoughts embarkin my head.
nice, it felt like a cure for what i myself wrote.
pascale
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