First imagination narrows
as your world is being changed,
your outlook becomes different
your priorities rearranged.
Your friends are taking second place
your darkest thoughts have light,
the lonely feelings gone at last
the future's looking bright.
You may not be religious
or believe in heaven above,
but anything is possible
now that you're in love.
Author notes
Love changes everything by Micheal Crawford
A contest entry
- Strange Things lie Behind This Link (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
360 points, ended April 8, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This poem's awesome!
Goodluck.
~XoXo Mollipop
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Title-8.5 good title obviously but i like when people change things up!
Flow-9.5 very nice flow!
Rules-10 you followed the rules!
Creativity-9.5 very unique choice and i really liked some of the lines
Song-8.5 i liked the song you choose but it would have been nice for you to add about some of the other things mentioned in the song...but still good job!
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great poem! good luck! -
Fantabulous
This poem I think is great. I remember when I fell in love pretty much going through those same things. It's a really beautiful piece of work, well structured, passionate, just wonderful. I loved the second stanza the most, but really it was all good. I wouldn't change a thing about it. Great write and good luck in the contest!
~*~Zenity
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very well deserved!!!!! hope so read some more of your work x
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I loved the shortness catchy side to the piece!!i loe the way it has been written and the power from deep withing that i can feel! When your in love anything is possible! It is the best feeling by far!! i am extremly impressed. thank you and good luck!
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There is nothing I would add or take away from this piece... It is simply put but oh so true. I feel like you must know me to have written the exact way I feel. I admire that you can put such feeling into words.
Thank you for entering my contest. Love and luck in all you endeavor!
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nice poeem good job and good luck in my contest
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But anything is possible now that you're in love. i love that phrase. it's just so sweet. *sigh* good job.
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"the lonely feelings gone at last
the future's looking bright,
you may not be religious
or believe in heaven above," is my favorite part good luck
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This is also good.
But anything is possible now that you are in love. Yes love is what it took for Christ to go to the cross. And love makes all things possible. -
that is very beautiful ,It makes me wonder about your gender ~lol~
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This is cute. It's also very true. Love changes everything--and I mean EVERYTHING--about life. You did a nice job expressing that thought. I love the way you wrote this one, too. You have a fantastic style. You write some pretty great love poems, too. I especially like this one.
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Love conquers all they say. Funny how it changes your life completley. Thoughts, actions even the way you carry yourself about. Love gives us so much, and your poem showed that so beautifully. Wonderful work. Kelly
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Excellent
Yes indeed true, your whole world does change. I love this poem and know that this is very true and you did a great job. -
The greates need
This is well put, an appreciation of that fantastic state of mind. True, your whole world changes for the better. I notice tha the previous remarks are critical of your reference to friends - it may be true, but none the less, "love conquers all" and will always win out.
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Aw, this is a sweet poem. And I find truth in it. However, I've come to realize that friends should not be put into second place, but have their own level. One of my ex boyfriends got along wonderfully with my best friend and we all three hung out all the time. I was afraid she'd feel like a third wheel, but she never did. She just understands that way. It was great because I never had to put her in second place, though I know it happens. I like the simplicity of the poem, thanks for entering.
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