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Falling Deeper

Every single time
I spend time with you
I fall in love more
I fall deeper into the hole

I want to forget about you
thats my New Years Revolution
to forget about liking you
for the past couple of years

You always flirt with me
and I flirt back
but we both know that this
isn't real

You don't really like me
yet I like you
So I mise well
get over you

Nothing will ever happen
between you and me
I've figured that out
and it hurts

It hurts me to like you
it hurts so much
to know that the person you like
will never ever like you back

I want to forget about you
so friggin bad
I think we need to stay away
from each other

I think it'll work
if I don't see you then
I can't fall any deeper into the hole
and maybe I can finally crawl out

Author notes

Yeah....says all it needs to say.

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  • -Kayleigh-
    January 6, 2007
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    Good.

    Heyyy this was good & I'm sorry that you feel this way. But hey trust me man there is someone out there for everyone & it might take awhile to find them but you will!! I promise!!!! I love you doode & keep up the great writing. ♥


  • XbasketballXchickX
    January 1, 2007
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    Lissy this is really really good I you know I can relate and you dont know if he dosent like you maybe he dose all you need to do is wait probley I dont know but we will get though Dont forget that I am hear for you ok love ya


    • Keep-Holding-On
      January 2, 2007
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      Thanks. I know he doesn't like me. You heard him. He said that he doesn't. So I mise well get over it.


  • PaigeyPie
    January 1, 2007

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    good

    I this poem is really good i just think and I want to know who the poem is about cause like i'm thinking it's about amie but i don't know so like is u could get back on that for me. I think that it's like deeper i'm not really improving my writing but it feels good when u write keep up the god writing on all my poems u write really great poems love u tons bye!!!!


    ♥___Freddy___♥


    • Keep-Holding-On
      January 1, 2007
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      Its about a guy, Paige. lol! Not Amie...I don't girls like that. lol! You should know that.

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