He is my love , He is my life,
I will love him my entire
life.
I will lay down and go to bed and
I think of him in my head.
I will go to sleep my head sticking
out of the sheets, I will dream of
him o I will dream.
I will wake up and get ready to go
but before I do I will sure say these
words once more...
he is my love, he is my life and I
will always love him my entire life,
my entire life... my entire life for
sure.
A contest entry
- Feel the Love by minicooper.
600 points, ended January 2, 2007, 24 entries
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lovely
so full of emotion. love is such a wonderful thing, isn't it?
I will dream of
him o I will dream.
my favorite part of the poem. yes, dream on about your love. wonderful job and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you, its like the best 1 I feel like i ever writen!!
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Thank you, its like the best 1 I feel like i ever writen!!
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this is very sweet. hey thanks for your comments, i appreciate them =)
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thanks
thanks, for commenting my poem and thanks for replying 2
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