looking in the mirror
wat i see
is terrifing
a lonly girl
trying to find
some one to love
she doesnt know the way
she has no way out
no way to escape
she walks alone
with no one
by her side
no one to help her
no one
to save her life
looking in the mirror
she wounders
why its like this
how someone
could sit around
and do this
A contest entry
- Prewrite Phenomenon #2 by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 9, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wat ~ what
lonly ~ lonely
you might want to consider checking your spelling after you are finished editing and in the midst of the poem. Good flow, but cheesy, regular concept. Thanks for your entry.
~Ryan~ -
awsome
amazing job!! i love it. keep up the writing!!
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I love this poem. I can relate! Awesome job!
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This is about me huh?
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