Sanguine streams across a promised dream,
searing off the bleakness in new horizons.
In faith's pledge of sureties brightest gleam,
an affirmation in spiritual warm defying.
Tomorrow no longer held in an icy grip,
escaped captive of pain's faithless lament.
Broken loose from it's lifeless cold shell,
floating weightless from imprisonments dwell.
Ice flows melt in a sizzled promise of tomorrow,
disillusions flow away in waves of banished sorrow.
~~Suseann~~
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such beautiful imagery here....I, too, beleive that release is like slow wnow melting.....and when it is melted..there is green, glorious green and new beginnings...beautifully done, my friend.
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This is a nice write, I would have preferred that you didn't sign it at the bottom as the rules state, but thanks for entering
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OMG! I'm sorry hoodoo,I do remember now you asking us not to.I'm sorry! Please forgive.I'm a bit under the weather and strung out on meds. My brain's running just in the barely humming mood.~Suseann
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This was a very deep and powerful poem. The flow was incredible. You did a great job sweety, and the best of luck to you in the contest!
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I like the way this poem uses fire and anger in a positive way - against the gloom and sorrow. Bravo!
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